|Reviews for Hideaway|
| Nathalie7 chapter 1 . 1/13
Good one shot. Apart from a few minor spelling errors (especially closer to the end), you did well with the writing overall and the build up of the sexual exploration between the sisters. What I liked especially about the story is the sexual innocence of both young women, in most of the stories written on here about the two sisters (I have read over 2000 since May 2014), is that the other authors either have one or both of them either having had some self exploration ahead of time...or even worse having Anna with a variable range of experiences from her interludes with Kristoff. The puritan in me, like them to be pure to each other...and I would imagine in that Era, women in general would be less likely to self explore sexually since more than likely, by the time they blossom into womanhood, they are already married off to some old man at least twice their age (yuck).
| Wolfguard22 chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
Loved it, beautifully written and perfectly paced. Erotic but not smutty. Truly a great read and a must for all Elsanna fans.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
This is probably THE BEST elsanna smut I have ever read. The progression between the two sisters felt so natural and the characters fit so well into the canon. You're amazing.
| Someone chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
._. I came for the smut. I definetly got it.
| Lance58 chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
If reality was anime I would have nosebleed all the way to the bloodbank!
| compa16 chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
| Used chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
This was really good. One thing that annoys me with some of these stories, is how the pain of first penetration is ignored. but other then that, this was really good.
| Dn chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
that was HOT. I liked it very much, even though it was hot as hell, it was still cute and with a good dose of fluff! nice job! :D
| catsmelt chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
| carmenrosa.aguilar.9 chapter 1 . 2/6/2014
O.O ohhh me has dejado sin palabras para expresar lo bueno que asido, te felicito por tan espectacula historia ) espero leer otras igual de buenas que esta o aun mejor
| Baku babe chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
For some reason the song "Hot n Cold" keeps playing inmy mind ;)
Friggin hot. With a capital H.
Best smut I've read. You actually kept their innocent personalities and made them discover 'things' during their exploration. Nice touch ;)
Honestly? This is perfect. If Frozen was an M-rated movie this is what I would've liked to see in it ;D
| Extraintrovert chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
This was so cute and hot. My favourite porn fics are always ones that devote just as much attention to the emotions and connections of the characters as it does the physical actions, and this certainly delivers on that. I love that you took the time to show why they're having sex, what it means to them and what they want from it, and all keeping it perfectly in character. I love that they're clearly so passionate about what they're doing and not just following a script. And I definitely love that they constantly asked the other to do this and whether or not they wanted to do that (enthusiastic consent is depressingly rare in porn, fanfiction or otherwise). There were some spelling mistakes (like Else instead of Elsa) and a few syntax errors, and some of the euphemisms (like "womanhood") I just find funny for some reason, but other than that this was thoroughly enjoyable.
| tutta88 chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
That was amazing! Gotta read more of your stories. Might need a cold shower first, though...
Best wishes from Norway! (God jul! ;) )
| Alexawynters chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
Unf. More please