|Reviews for Dank|
| Blufirebabe chapter 23 . 6/28
I wish I'd thought to read the last chapter first...
| anon52484 chapter 23 . 6/21
Please continue pleaseeeeeeee
| Guest chapter 23 . 5/25
Yes we expect Edward to give in. How is Bella going to know she’s any different from others or if she means anything to him if he treats her like everyone else!
And are you rewriting everything? It’s not finished! Ahh!
| Guest chapter 20 . 5/25
Read all chapters in the last day minus the next ones. Well it’s good to see them open up. But they all drive me crazy! Edward is so frustrating and Vella is so confusing and Eric is so annoying ! This story is driving me crazy cuz they’re all frustrating but it’s pullrd me in. It drives me nuts that one if the best stories I’ve read has these characters that drive me insane but I guess that’s part of what makes it so intriguing.
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/24
BELLA needs to sit down. She’s putting all the focus on blaming Charlie when she really is mad at him for how Edward is treating her and how mike treated her. Being controlling and being selfish are the traits she’s throwing on Charlie when that’s really ed and mike. It’s so frustrating that she’s taking all her mixed feelings out on Charlie and not the people that use and abuse her. She’s weak and needs to grow up and get real
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/24
I don’t get why she keeps lumping Charlie with mike and Eric and all those people trying to oppress her— she sounds whiney and looking for someone to blame other than herself and Charlie hasn’t done anything.
I’m glad jake told her straight to her face what she’s doing since she’s too intrigued by Edward to think clearly.
I don’t believe Edward is breaking into mikes house just for Bella so she shouldn’t take that as him trying to be anything other than he is—a criminal who doesn’t care. I hope she isn’t swayed by his pretty face but clearly it’s nt working
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/24
Surprised he didn’t show more emotion when he saw her bruised face. He obviously doesn’t care like she does
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/24
Not liking Vella so far. She’s weak and changes her mind too much— she seems like she can’t get a handle on her feelings since she changes her mind too often and is very contradictory in thoughts and actions . She is just weak person and hopefully changes. Mike and Bella together are gross
| Ayeza428 chapter 1 . 5/20
| Lord-of Oceans-Poseidon chapter 1 . 5/11
Laughing so hard after I was through with this first chapter. I loved it.
| xoambxo chapter 23 . 5/8
Jesus... lord... please please PLEASE update soon. I love the story. If you want to rewrite that’s fine as long as you finish this! I love it! Honestly I love the story as is though! Please for all your readers please finish this. Let Edward claim his girl. I love your innocent Bella and Bad about Edward. Omg please, girl. Come on please!
| Guest chapter 23 . 5/6
I’d be down for a rewrite :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/5
| engee chapter 23 . 5/3
Hey I just got into this story last night... I binge read it all and stayed up late. I'm surprised you cringed at it? I enjoyed your story so much I hope you continue writing it! It's rare that a fic keeps me up so late because I can't put it down... "just one more chapter" at 4am lol
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/30
Eww. Did you have to go into detail with Bella and Mike. Made me feel sick