I thoroughly enjoyed the crushing rock scene. That should’ve been in the book about what he said… the rock being older than both of them and withstanding nature. Love it

nice realization and kiss

That's one way to introduce the mind reading.

Noooo no no no! You can’t leave it there! Oh my lord, this has captivated me since I first started it! Aaahhh please come out with the sequel

lovely story. I must say way better than the original

Loved your story , now favourited!

I really, really enjoyed this story. It was refreshing to read a AU of Twilight that focused solely on their developing relationship. The communication that allowed them to further discuss changing her and their rational was much more realistic / reasonable than the original Twilight. A beautiful read that left me happy & hopeful! Exactly what I needed. Even with the impending Volturi visit, so far your writing has been optimistic so even if the sequel isn't finished or updated, I can rest easy knowing this story will likely have a happy ending.

Great story!

This is super good

Aww

She might be in denial of her feelings and embarrassed.

Yikes

who doesn't love a snarky Bella; the whole premise of E/B getting to know one another is great

Wow. Can't wait to see what happens next.

I live your more mature, thoughtful, considerate and well spoken Bella.