Cant believe someone would choose to stop reading after this prologue. Really well written!

Dang, this story is amazing, wish there was more!

honestly dentists not liking orthodontists is so real id fistfight one of those losers too

Poor Hermione. She's been obliviated so many timess.

ummmm woah. unexpecteddd. Funnily enough, this is the first fanfic I've read where Madame Pomfrey dies and it's actually mentioned. Even in dark stories where it seems like so many important people are dead, she alive HAHHAHA or if she did die, she's never one of the people that is mentioned to be dead

Remove Harry and the Weasleys and it is just plain boring.

Does the story end here? Is it being updated?

this has become unbearably pretentious. goodbye.

yeah, it is wrong. and all those people who fight back against the idea of stopping it for good are disgusting, whatever their reasons. I've yet to encounter a single good reason against the abolition of death. because there isn't one, just sophistry.

OH MY FUCKING GOD THE TWIST IH MY GOD IH MY GOD OH MY GOD I WASNT EXPECTING THAT

Absolutely loved this, rather bummed that it seems to be abandoned.
I hope you continue in the future, you've done an incredible job!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA IT CANT BE OVER REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE NOW BACK TO BE DEPRESSED

Was the prologue been edited? SURELY people had a reason to drop this fic by reading the prologue... but then again I've seen some people casually handing out death threats here instead of giving a understandable constructive criticism.

RN I don't see any problems with the prologue, and even though this is my first read, I hope those who've read this review would give it a chance.

Though I'm pretty sure it's abandoned... been like, what, 5 years or something? Hopefully the author give this another chance.

Looking forward in reading this... and subsequently get frustrated at myself for reading WIP/dead fics lol

I love this. It's sad to see that it appears to be abandoned. I've been searching for more Hermione centric fanfiction. I particularly love the twists in this chapter how she met Tonks (I was confused at first but by the end laughing) and how she did turn the rat yellow (I could imagine George's reaction quite clearly lol). Really excited for the rest and intrigued with how this change of meeting will alter things.

I can’t imagine how readers are dropping this story after the prologue, it’s one of my fave fanfiction openers I’ve read in a long time!