|Reviews for The Lion King: Kovu and Kiara's Journey 2|
| Buka2000 chapter 3 . 7/12
This would have been better added on to chapter 2. Would have made it a bit longer, and you could have made chapter 4 this chapter. And maybe added another one in place of the current chapter 4.
Still not too much detail and the description for Cara was confusing.
| Buka2000 chapter 1 . 7/12
A little bit short. I was a little offput by the word count compared to how many chapters you have. I can average at least 10,000 words or more.
And maybe have a little more detail in your stories. It will help with word count, and it will help draw the readers in.
Perhaps you would be interested in reading the start of my OCs story when I get it uploaded.
| Asante chapter 8 . 7/17/2014
Good story so far, though I feel like Kiara should have shown a bit more concern over the fact that her son ran off. I would expect the pride to go out and search for him.
| Mystery99 chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
Hmm...good start. Can't wait to see where you take this story