Reviews for Downslope
SkepticalBeliever chapter 7 . 11/24
Too darn cute. Can't handle it. :D
Guest chapter 7 . 6/1
Omigosh. This story was so good! I never really thought about Kilik and Liz before, ut now I cant stop! It made me realize how weak the KiLiz pairing was, I just didn't know who to pair Liz with. But this story made me so happy reading it. It was adorable! You did such an amazing job! Keep going!
Guest chapter 5 . 5/13
Kim is greedy. Only wants soul for his money. Pfft.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/31
There is a typo in the second to last paragraph. You wrote loWger and I'm not sure what you meant to write but I'm pretty sure it was longer?
BendAndCurl chapter 7 . 3/3
This was sooooooo goooooooooooooooood ahhhhhhhhhhhhh it was perfect.

Aw I loved when Soul asked if he could kiss her. He's so tender I could cry. Aw and when he thought that if he spilled his feelings to her HE might cry. *sniffs loudly*

Even though I appreciate smut, there was something so perfect and wholesome about this one, partly cause it left everything up to the imagination. Idk, it was really perfect, and I think it was actually better for not having the smut, which is rare (in my opinion).

I guess I'm gonna go through and read your other fics now...
BendAndCurl chapter 4 . 3/3
omg Black*Star in charge of children... Just. no. Babysitting is not one of his "godly skillz" I guess?

Also I'm nursing a soft spot for Harvar in this fic. I don't know what he's up to yet, but I like him.
BendAndCurl chapter 3 . 3/3
*Shakes fist at Kim!* stay away from my OTP!

Poor Jackie. I've been there, girl. Falling for your straight best friend? It's a rite of passage.

Also yay for Lizik (Lillik?) !

I'm enjoying this fic so much, and it doesn't hurt that it's set in my home state :)
BendAndCurl chapter 2 . 3/3
OMG Maka's musings about Soul are so CUTE! Bustling around like a housewife, I love it :3 Of course Soul's family would have a cabin in Aspen. I know exactly the kind of cabin you're writing about, they're super fancy. Also yay for Jackie/Kim romance! I am so excited to read more of this fic. Welp on to the next chapter I go...
PreparedForZombies chapter 7 . 1/24
*Stands up from computer, walks out the door and into the snow. Keeps walking*
After being found by the cops:
Cop: What did her in?
Coroner: It would appear that she suffered colossal synapse implosion after an overdose of what is termed as "fluff" by the fan fiction community.
Cop: Damn these kids and their fan fiction. That's the fourth on this month.

Good job ilarual.
fantsyfreak chapter 6 . 1/19
Yes, so much cheese, but it was AWESOME!
Guest chapter 7 . 1/1
this was so good GOOD JOB
Guest chapter 4 . 1/1
omg the characters are on point i love it ! too bad kid left thou
Guest chapter 3 . 1/1
omg that is sooo gooodd i love it it souds soo realistic goood JOB
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1
omg the prologue is already beginning to sound exciting!
kittenintheden chapter 7 . 10/26/2014
As fluffy and sort of cheesy as this is, it made me SO VERY HAPPY OH MY GOSH. Just. I can't. CUTIES EVERYWHERE. I love that you utilized everyone. I was admittedly a little sad to hear that this was originally going to be smut central but it all had to go, but it's okay because OMG WARM FUZZIES THOUGH. Lovely.
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