|Reviews for Downslope|
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/31
There is a typo in the second to last paragraph. You wrote loWger and I'm not sure what you meant to write but I'm pretty sure it was longer?
| BendAndCurl chapter 7 . 3/3
This was sooooooo goooooooooooooooood ahhhhhhhhhhhhh it was perfect.
Aw I loved when Soul asked if he could kiss her. He's so tender I could cry. Aw and when he thought that if he spilled his feelings to her HE might cry. *sniffs loudly*
Even though I appreciate smut, there was something so perfect and wholesome about this one, partly cause it left everything up to the imagination. Idk, it was really perfect, and I think it was actually better for not having the smut, which is rare (in my opinion).
I guess I'm gonna go through and read your other fics now...
| BendAndCurl chapter 4 . 3/3
omg Black*Star in charge of children... Just. no. Babysitting is not one of his "godly skillz" I guess?
Also I'm nursing a soft spot for Harvar in this fic. I don't know what he's up to yet, but I like him.
| BendAndCurl chapter 3 . 3/3
*Shakes fist at Kim!* stay away from my OTP!
Poor Jackie. I've been there, girl. Falling for your straight best friend? It's a rite of passage.
Also yay for Lizik (Lillik?) !
I'm enjoying this fic so much, and it doesn't hurt that it's set in my home state :)
| BendAndCurl chapter 2 . 3/3
OMG Maka's musings about Soul are so CUTE! Bustling around like a housewife, I love it :3 Of course Soul's family would have a cabin in Aspen. I know exactly the kind of cabin you're writing about, they're super fancy. Also yay for Jackie/Kim romance! I am so excited to read more of this fic. Welp on to the next chapter I go...
| PreparedForZombies chapter 7 . 1/24
*Stands up from computer, walks out the door and into the snow. Keeps walking*
After being found by the cops:
Cop: What did her in?
Coroner: It would appear that she suffered colossal synapse implosion after an overdose of what is termed as "fluff" by the fan fiction community.
Cop: Damn these kids and their fan fiction. That's the fourth on this month.
Good job ilarual.
| fantsyfreak chapter 6 . 1/19
Yes, so much cheese, but it was AWESOME!
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/1
this was so good GOOD JOB
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/1
omg the characters are on point i love it ! too bad kid left thou
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/1
omg that is sooo gooodd i love it it souds soo realistic goood JOB
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/1
omg the prologue is already beginning to sound exciting!
| kittenintheden chapter 7 . 10/26/2014
As fluffy and sort of cheesy as this is, it made me SO VERY HAPPY OH MY GOSH. Just. I can't. CUTIES EVERYWHERE. I love that you utilized everyone. I was admittedly a little sad to hear that this was originally going to be smut central but it all had to go, but it's okay because OMG WARM FUZZIES THOUGH. Lovely.
| Afienasm chapter 7 . 5/22/2014
I laughed like mad at Black*Star there. Great story!
| kaji13 chapter 6 . 5/16/2014
So. Much. WONDERFUL. Cheese!
| kaji13 chapter 3 . 5/16/2014
Liz and Kilik, eh? There's a pairing I had never considered before...I've always been a LizxKid fan, but I've always liked Kilik's character. Interesting.