Reviews for Boxing Out
DarkKing009 chapter 1 . 2/28
damn good
iceblade chapter 1 . 5/11/2016
oh my gods. that was AMAZING and so BEAUTIFUL!
Rrit chapter 1 . 4/26/2016
Super cute and funny. I appreciated Mai's humor
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2016
Painting her room orange, haha! Tom-Tom is so sweet in this. I love it.
harleycleomusajackie chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
Update or make a twos of message me
Private Fire chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
I'm so glad that you posted this story. There is so much to like here. I guess my favorite part is . . . you know, I can't pick just one thing. It is all good!
ButterPie chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
Lol I loved Sokka in this one, Fire nation baby!
Great story, it gave hope at the end of the comics lol
FanFicCriTicTheThird chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
That was too beautiful
Guest chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
I love this... Thank you! :)
Julia451 chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
Hilarious! Everyone in character, every line perfect for the character, every exchange absolutely golden!
Loopy777 chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
Wow, you have a great sense of the characters' voices (especially Sokka's, one that not many people can do) and a perfect sense of humor/timing. Even if I wasn't a big fan of these characters and pairing, that would be enough to make this story notable. As it is, though, it's a great little tale bringing Zuko and Mai back together (after a fashion) while staying true to their characters and the tone of the franchise. Mai and Zuko didn't exactly communicate very efficiently about the problems that broke them up, but they did approach the issue in their own way, and resolved it amusingly.

If you ever want to play in this franchise again, I'd love to see it.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
Zuko's actually a lot better with children than he gives himself credit for, well, at least your story's version of him anyway. Don't worry. Your story's Zuko is pretty more or less in-character
Mona chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
Loved it! Seriously, everyone was so in character! Especially loved Zuko's awkward attempts at conversation and Iroh's not-so-subtle matchmaking. Also, Mai's reactions were perfect. It was great! XD
albrie II chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
This is awesome!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
I loved it! This is how I wished it would have happened! Please add more chapters to this and update
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