Reviews for Beautiful Nightmare on Christmas Eve
Alexis chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
AAAHHHHHHH WHEN SHE CALLED HIM DAD MY HEART LITTERALLY SHATTERED INTO A MILLION PIECES OHMYGOSH THIS IS AMAZING THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS YOU WONDERFUL HUMAN BEING
Sideswipe124 chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
:o
Holy...crap...
The was beautiful. I know this review sucks and I'm not the best at them, but this one is really good.:D
J chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
THE FEELS! Beautifully done. Amazing work of art. Keep it up.
Astern chapter 1 . 12/25/2013
Reading this on Christmas, how appropriate. :) Beautiful little piece. Nice depiction of Joel and Ellie's relationship up until this point - clearly they've formed an attachment, but there is still plenty that Ellie doesn't know about Joel, and probably doesn't want to. I also like how you've managed to convey Ellie's sense of loneliness at this point in the story. You figure she spent probably several weeks, if not months, nursing Joel between the time of his injury and when she met David. The atmosphere you create in just a short snippet is right on - the cold isolation, only Joel's nightmares and delusions for company. And yet just a sliver of hope in recognizing a holiday now part of a lost world. Just perfect.

Loved it. Nicely done. :)
lionfart chapter 1 . 12/25/2013
this hurts my heart in a good way