|Reviews for Target Practice|
| Sugaryfluff chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
Teehee this was super cute! _ I know nothing about the characters and yet I could appreciate all the cutesy fluff here :P I liked Robin's role as facilitator XD And I really liked how you explored Roy's struggle with his identity, as teens often do. I hadn't heard of "the whale in the room" expression before, just the elephant in the room, but same thing? *cough cough* like in a certain wedding episode of a certain show...XD
A few typos if you care to edit this - " 1) "you'll understand when you're older"; 2) Roy vented his frustration in the form of a dramatic, purposeful sigh"; 3) allowing the issue to be put away for the time being; 4) "Kung fu, huh?" Garth was interrupted... I'd be happy to be your beta reader anytime :)
Awesome job! I liked the archery references too :) Hope I can do a fic exchange with you someday!
| Assibell chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
This was a really nice story, and I love how you gender bended Robin and Star. Good job!
| Princess Unikitty chapter 1 . 12/25/2013
Hi friend, nice to see you posting something again! It was pretty hard to tell that this was your first time writing this pairing, might have been harder if you had just written one long story instead of three short ones. Or it might have been like that if there were more short stories, I dunno
Either way this was pretty dang good nice job