Reviews for GI Joe: Vision Lost
NowAskYourself-WhatWouldLokiDo chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
First of all it's Baroness, not Barenness, and second of all she has brown eyes, and she's not German, she's European. Anyway I enjoyed reading this story. Good job.
Lima323 chapter 1 . 3/10/2004
GO Snake Eyes. Your' the man.
I really like this story. And Snarky is my all time fave. You know how to describe him, I'll give ya that...and the little joke about his silence in the infirmary...priceless.
StevenM chapter 1 . 1/28/2003
Hey everyone,

I just wanted to say that I've fixed the paragraph structure and put them into mini-chapters. I'm sure almost everyone refused to read this because it looked too cluttered. Well its fixed and I hope you decide to read it. Enjoy!
Babel chapter 1 . 10/5/2002
Yikes, fix the structure, it's like a series of huge blocks with no beginning and no end. But good story.