|Reviews for GI Joe: Vision Lost|
| ThatsEnoughHansel chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
First of all it's Baroness, not Barenness, and second of all she has brown eyes, and she's not German, she's European. Anyway I enjoyed reading this story. Good job.
| Lima323 chapter 1 . 3/10/2004
GO Snake Eyes. Your' the man.
I really like this story. And Snarky is my all time fave. You know how to describe him, I'll give ya that...and the little joke about his silence in the infirmary...priceless.
| StevenM chapter 1 . 1/28/2003
I just wanted to say that I've fixed the paragraph structure and put them into mini-chapters. I'm sure almost everyone refused to read this because it looked too cluttered. Well its fixed and I hope you decide to read it. Enjoy!
| Babel chapter 1 . 10/5/2002
Yikes, fix the structure, it's like a series of huge blocks with no beginning and no end. But good story.