|Reviews for Fly|
| BlazingShadow chapter 1 . 3/29
Well put it this way, I have an extraordinary imagination. Good enough to make a creature out of maybe say 5 words that's detailed to the bone, scale and eye. So couple that with this positively amazing story, I cried like hell. I imagined every detail, every movement and subconsciously 'animated' it in my own head. One of the saddest yet most beautifully written pieces of fanfiction ever. You genuinely have a great talent Candyland. And after seeing your other pieces this confirms it. Use your amazing gift wisely, and even though you probably will never see this, know that whatever you write, record or say, I'll be glad to listen, watch and wait for more. Have a great day and keep on making great stories like this one.
| HeartBroken chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
Eyes streaming...breathing heavy...sobbing constantly...
I PROMISED MYSELF I WOULDN'T CRY! I BROKE MY OWN PROMISE! TT
| BrokenHeart chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
name says everything
| dbzknowitall chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
2 things. 1 I cant believe i never cried through this. 2 why didnt they wish away the disease. if not with shenron, porunga then ultimate shenron and wish for a new planet
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
T-T I'm really crying, but I dont cry easily. It just shows how...wow...this is.
| Scoobygirl45 chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
You were right this was so sad but it was still really good
| KTDLover chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
This was heart-wrenching and beautiful.
| dragonball256 chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Beautiful, no words can express how awesome and heartbreaking this was
| mikey3471648 chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
I went in thinking, 'ok it's a sad story idea but I know for a fact I won't cry'. Well I was wrong, right when Gohan started his story telling with Goten I started to get hysterical. It was the most beautiful story I ever read on this site. Thanks for making me think about how important the people in my life are and how even when there gone, there not. Thank you.
| Reviewer chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Awww. What a sad but loving story. This story SHOULD only have one chapter.
| rayhaan chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
it was so sad
| Rayhaan chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
was so sad I cried and cried
| castelli35 chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
this story gave me chills, i absolutely loved it!
| Chary5 chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
I cried reading this...
The story was beautiful...Written perfectly...
You did an amazing job!
| GrecaArtista chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
I LOVE YOU GOTEN!