|Reviews for Fly|
| HeartBroken chapter 1 . 4/10
Eyes streaming...breathing heavy...sobbing constantly...
I PROMISED MYSELF I WOULDN'T CRY! I BROKE MY OWN PROMISE! TT
| BrokenHeart chapter 1 . 3/7
name says everything
| dbzknowitall chapter 1 . 10/17/2014
2 things. 1 I cant believe i never cried through this. 2 why didnt they wish away the disease. if not with shenron, porunga then ultimate shenron and wish for a new planet
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
T-T I'm really crying, but I dont cry easily. It just shows how...wow...this is.
| Scoobygirl45 chapter 1 . 4/30/2014
You were right this was so sad but it was still really good
| KTDLover chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
This was heart-wrenching and beautiful.
| dragonball256 chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Beautiful, no words can express how awesome and heartbreaking this was
| mikey3471648 chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
I went in thinking, 'ok it's a sad story idea but I know for a fact I won't cry'. Well I was wrong, right when Gohan started his story telling with Goten I started to get hysterical. It was the most beautiful story I ever read on this site. Thanks for making me think about how important the people in my life are and how even when there gone, there not. Thank you.
| Reviewer chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Awww. What a sad but loving story. This story SHOULD only have one chapter.
| rayhaan chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
it was so sad
| Rayhaan chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
was so sad I cried and cried
| castelli35 chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
this story gave me chills, i absolutely loved it!
| Chary5 chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
I cried reading this...
The story was beautiful...Written perfectly...
You did an amazing job!
| GrecaArtista chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
I LOVE YOU GOTEN!
| AquaMarias chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
At first I thought I wouldn't cry, but after the first paragraph I ended up bawling. Your such a great writer keep up the good work. The end was very touching.