Reviews for New Devil of The Gremory House |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, I think I already have an idea of who Azazel wants to put Naruto in contact with, Vali's reaction will be very funny, I look forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely a normal day for the ORC Naruto. A good read and I look forward to the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not related to the chap but could you pls implement some jjk elements for Sasuke i kinda want him to give Naruto more challenge when they face each other Gojo's infinity Blue and Red works really well with the Deva path of rinnegan they both pull and repel though Red and Blue are more complex it could be made that the deva path evolved giving birth to these advanced versions Also i can kinda see the animal path evolve allowing him to summon a being like mohoraga or something of the same level |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you very much for continuing this great story. I love how this world and its characters are developing. And the situations you create are also incredibly funny. Haha, it always makes me smile reading the hilarious and crazy situations you put our dear victims in. LOL. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so you are introducing Lavinia next chapter? let's go! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it, good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed this chapter and it is a bit funny how Rias is still going through a sexual identity crisis and telling middle school girls to boot. Poor girl she is desperate to figure herself out and isn't coming to terms that she may be bisexual. Hopefully she figures that out soon. Also looking forward to the next arc! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome work please continue the story it's incredible |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to Chapter 66. |
![]() ![]() ![]() When’s the next chapter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great chapter. Naruto’s turmoil with his affair with Kuroka and bringing his parents to life. Quite the dilemma. I do hope Kuroka becomes part of Naruto’s harem. I know that she said that she’s not gonna pursue him but I do hope she changes her mind. Joining his harem will get her more closer to her sister better than ever. Speaking of Naruto’s harem, can we get Akeno and Rossweisse to join too? Despite all the bickering these two have with each other, I feel that Akeno was just hiding her feelings or at least trying not fall in love with Naruto. It’s clear Akeno has great respect for Naruto, also throwing a bit of S&M into the mix will give future lemon scenes more variety. As for Rossweisse, she’s not getting much love here. She’s been has developing feelings for Naruto even having sexual fantasies about him. It’ll be good for her to get in a relationship with Naruto someone she can trust. Plus a professional woman like her who is also his school teacher; I can already imagine some student & teacher role play. I can’t wait for Minato and Kushina to join into the story. Even though they’re copies of the original. However they still have the memories and experience as the originals. Can’t wait for the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() RAAAAAA I NEED MORE! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cant say I enjoy the idea of Naruto’s parents coming back. BUT, you did say that this chapter was the last of the ‘intermissions’ before it goes into heavier story, leading me to believe that this is going to link into something for DxD’s canon story. I just hope it isn’t too traumatic for him, parents back and then their souls are devoured or something. Looking forward to your work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your a shit writer ngl |