Reviews for New Devil of The Gremory House
RaidenKyo chapter 64 . 7/28/2024
Now all we need is rose, akeno, and maybe yasaka if you don't have plans for her elsewhere and the harem will be complete( i can see akeno joining through rias girl on girl session and maybe yasaka as a cougar who kushina tries to keep her away from her son lol) also mentioning p5 in my last review maybe there is some fresh ideas of naruto ending up in the persona world (3, 4, or 5 where ever you want ro start him at) that once u get inspiration for it
Nostallonlywork chapter 64 . 7/28/2024
ppl who are saying this was a bad chapter go make a better fic if you think this one is bad usoratonkachi's
RaidenKyo chapter 64 . 7/28/2024
* siri play persona5 whims of fate *
GIve IN to temptation!
Nostallonlywork chapter 1 . 7/28/2024
my glorious king you have made my day with this. but i read tah and you said orochimaru is a child rapist note he is not he does not rape kids that is given to him because they are comparing him to hisoka. orochimaru only experiments on ppl because he doesn't want to die like his parents so he take the body of younger individuals who are young and have many years ahead but other that this was an amazing chapter keep up the good work wish i could pay you for this man and dont listen to these ppl not wanting naruto's parents back its your fic and as the saying goes if you have a hundred fans im one of them if you have one its me and if you have no fans im dead so dont give just like naruto never gave up dattebayo
Yuki Riki chapter 64 . 7/28/2024
Kuroka confirmed in the Harem?
TWANW chapter 64 . 7/28/2024
I do not want Naruto's parents to be back. They are already dead and should just stay dead.

I think bringing his parents back would invalidate Naruto's struggle to accept they are gone.

There's a word for a period like "backtrack", maybe? There's another word for it that I cannot remember. ..

Also. I don't see how that would serve the plot you got going for in any way.

Unless you have a plan and it's essential to the plot. Go on ahead. However. If it's just for family fluff. I rather you not bring back Naruto's parents back.

I would really much rather you focus on DxD version of Minato you have created. I actually really like this original character you have created for the story.

Next. I cannot believe you actually had Kuroka sleep with Naruto and Rias. I know at the last chapter you may have hinted it that she was planning to do something, but I still can't believe you actually went through with it.

I'm kind of on board with adding Kuroka but it is much too soon after Naruto just recently taken in this next step with his relationships with Xenovia and Koneko.

Don't get me wrong. The sex scene was hot. Very hot.

But it feels like just much too soon after everything that's happened with Naruto, Rias, Xenovi, and Koneko. Although I believe you had the other characters has specified that Naruto and Kuroka are not necessary in love yet. But just engage in their carnal urges with each other.

In other words, they f*****. Not make love.

Which I'm kind of fine with that at this stage of the dynamic and relationship.

Which is why I'm especially glad Naruto and Rias are still reeling over it Especially Rias.

A "what the fuck did we just do!?" dilemma/ crisis.

I know it's a harem story because it's DxD.

But four girls is kind of pushing it.

When is two or three girls? It's believable for the dynamic and relationship to develop into a meaningful and equal setting when it comes to love.

But when it's more than that. It becomes less believable for everyone to be equally loved and valued in the relationship.

Rossweise I believe has shown to be infatuated and have a crush on Naruto so I imagine she is the last girl. After that, I hope there's no more.

Next. Sorry bud. While I love how you've written Azazel I find it hard to believe he would do anything with man sexually or show any sexual attraction to men.
Yahiko 8D chapter 64 . 7/28/2024
we need akeno... just sayin, great chapter
amavgupta0 chapter 64 . 7/28/2024
I dont want naruto parents to be back, first they are already dead, 2nd they won’t be real, 3rd they are just chakra constructs which were programmed PROGRAMMED to activate for only a specific task, 4th move on instead of being stuck in the past like i know they are his parents and he’s also a orphan but after living all your life without parents, getting old enough to find love yourself, at that point in time there is no need for parents and bro literally never even knew them until he met their chakra constructs, wasnt tsunade like his parent, isnt rias family not enough for him and all the girls also, with his life settled now would he even have enough time for his parents if we think about it realistically like the time you share with your parents that childhood is gone, move on thats thing i am gonna say
Savageverse chapter 64 . 7/27/2024
Gender is not a construct don't get political
VicenteVanCoco04 chapter 63 . 7/27/2024
Maldita sea, vengo de la historia crossover con RWBY y comenté sobre lo genial que fueron las reuniones de Naruto con sus padres en la serie original y ahora sucede esto en la historia... No estoy al día con Titania y el Cazador, así que no tengo idea si está pasando algo parecido a las primeras historias que mencione XD.
Entonces, Kuroka estará en el harem en algunos capítulos más, será entretenido mientras tanto.
Mi chica preferida es Rossweisse, pero Xenovia es la mejor de todo DxD (superando a Rías y Akeno, que son las chicas más populares), y este capitulo resalta bastante algunas cosas que me gustan de ella en las novelas, la chica no tiene sentido común, pero eso provoca momentos que la hacen resaltar mucho más con Issei que otras chicas.
ghostFLIN chapter 64 . 7/27/2024
Excellent chapter bro continue soon
Blaze501st chapter 64 . 7/27/2024
this is amazing. I thought that after you introduced Naruto's parents, that you would do something like this. I figured that if Azazel could give bodies to the Biju, then giving some to Naruto's parents would be something he could do. I am glad to see that my idea was correct! Looking forward to Kushina and Minato meeting Rias and his Harem, and finding out about Naruto's life!
bednarczykmiki chapter 64 . 7/27/2024
Well,that's one heck of a cliffhanger
Yeeticus chapter 64 . 7/27/2024
HOPW SOMEONE GIVES YOU THE SLOPPIEST TOP OF ALL TIME FOR THIS CHAPTER !, THANK YOU FOR THIS MEAL, W AUTHOR
wolf191000 chapter 64 . 7/27/2024
What a HOT and Funny chapter!
I've always liked reading about Naruto and Kuroka getting it on especially when Rias joins in (Nice;).

I had a feeling we'd be going about bringing Naruto's parents back to life after seeing Minato in this story for the first time.
I can't wait to see them in D&D.

Until next time!
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