I really love this story i just wish youd give a bit more focus on Issei like I know its a naruto xover but sometimes it seems you want to phase Issei out completely Just asking for him to get a bit more love hopefully equal to Naruto

Dear lord why is this an issue. This might be one of the most unnecessary inclusions in this story. Naruto has gotten over his parents and he has people that love him. Why regress the vharacter so much. Personally i already wasnt a fun of everything done with the bijuu in the first place so i might drop the story, but this is just unnecessary

Kinda tired of people begging u to ship characters
it should progress naturanaturally on who decides to stay with who its esy to tell when it feels like forced and it throws story and the charc out form how they are usually supposed to be

U know, even though what Naruto has with his Remote Looper is similar to what Obito and Madara were trying to accomplish, the difference between them is the price that is paid for it.
For the Uchihas, they've harmed people to create an illusionary world instead of facing reality of filled with tragedies. It was a lot of effort to get to where they're at.
For Naruto, he made his Sacred Gear strong enough to gain the ability to regressed to certain points where even he could speak to his parents again. At the price of a limited time each day and resetting his conversations with his parents.
The main point is that there are lines that can't be crossed when it comes to harming others. As well as seeking out to create what isn't real.
Naruto isn't aware of the possibility that he could see his parents again thanks to the Remote Looper. It was the opportunity of a lifetime.
The Uchihas are fully aware wit what they've done at the costs of other lives. It was an action that leads to no turning back.
Hopefully this helps somehow with the progression of this story.
Hppe to see the next chapter soon!

hmmmm
Okay, this is interesting.
But, a new addition?
I wasn't aware that Dxd Was being updated again.

Oh man, what can I say? It's been great rereading this from the beginning. I like where it's going and I do hope we see more of the emotionally damaged Naruto. Even though he doesn't show it, I'm sure he has a lot of trauma from not having parents. I also hope Kuroka and Roseweiss start being integrated into the harem. If I could I would say maybe one or two more. Either the new girl, yasaka or akeno.

I know it's annoying to ask, but Sasuke is still with the Hindu faction, right?

Wait so we’re expecting Kuroka and Roseweiss?

please please please don't make kuroka get with naruto im begging you

Azazel trabajando en un nuevo power up para naruto, ¿por favor?

cant wait to read whatever shit thats gonna happen to naruto that probably has to do with azazel and kuroka
love this fic

Dear codywhite162, again, sorry:

Irina also has Chomei's ability, which is the screaming one from previous chapters. I gotta ask: have you even read the story without realizing it?

Dear codywhite162:

Xenovia is paired with Kokuo. In which she is producing steam from the Bijuu, and the eye pigment from it.

I am really happy to see this back! The Biju are all living their best lives and of course Shukaku is about to ruin it for everyone. I am also really enjoying each member of the ORC training to utilize their tailed beast chakra and I noticed that Rias has Kurama's chakra and Akeno got Gyuki's. So from the start Kiba has Shukaku, Koneko with Matatabi, Rossweisse with Isobu, Son Goku and Kokuo didn't lend out their chakra to anyone I believe, Asia has Saiken, Chomei didn't lend any chakra out as well. As for the struggle Naruto is going through I can feel his emotions and agony. His meeting with Minato and Kushina was brief and powerful and now due to his sacred gear he can talk to them whenever but as he said it's just an illusion it's not really them but an echo. The ending of this chapter is making me think Azazel is going to try to bring back Naruto's parents using his research on the Tailed Beast chakra so they can be permanent and exist again. All in all really happy this awesome story is continuing and I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Hello,

I would like you to know that this is one of the best High School DxD crossovers with Naruto out there. The writing is superb, and the character development is as well. These characters don't feel like characters; they feel like humans that go through growth. If you continue writing fanfictions, which I hope you do, a lot of writers do not have their characters go through proper development, especially in crossovers. They'll have Naruto come in and have a special ability or place him into a plot in which he doesn't belong and not change the other characters around him. That is a really great thing that you're doing. You seem very well-researched.

I love that you used two of my all-time favorite characters in the show and added them as his girlfriends—a religious fanatic blue-haired girl, you know who I'm talking about. I just can't spell the name, and voice to text doesn't want to say it. I'm also really impressed that you have a story that you wanted to tell, you set up to tell it, and you are going to tell it to the end, hopefully. A lot of fanfic authors who write don't finish.

I remember picking this story up when I first started reading Naruto fanfiction, and I have to admit to you I didn't like it. I could not appreciate the slow pace and the lack of chakra given to Naruto because I could not see the vision and I was impatient back then. Now that there are more chapters, I just skip if I want to reread—no fault of your own, I just have a short attention span. Even a character I don't like, the Crimson Ruin Princess, you make very likable and human. You see tropes and you don't abide by them, at least not to the extent that others in this community do.

I hope you pave the way and continue writing new crossovers because, again, I love the interactions between the characters. I love how you don't forget about these characters. A lot of people will forget about the tailed beasts for chapters on end without them being mentioned or consulted, but you haven't. I hope my tastes change and I come back to this amazing story because, I mean, it's no concern to you—you haven't done anything wrong. It's me, and I'm leaving this comment to thank you for writing this and hopefully convince you to write more crossovers, especially of Naruto crossovers that aren't as popular or usually well done, like Resident Evil or Ben 10, The Last of Us, Fallout, or League of Legends. Somehow, you managed to turn a crossover that's dreaded into a beloved one.

The only reason why I am no longer sticking around for the journey as of now is because of how you handle the power system. It's not like you didn't hold true to who Naruto's character is or how a human being or even Naruto would react if he found himself in the circumstances. Number one, I just don't really read stories if the tailed beasts are set free or if chakra is taught. For me, the fun of reading a crossover isn't Naruto overpowering. I don't care if he's the weakest, as long as it's done compellingly and it's not constantly rubbed in the reader's face that this character is weak. That was literally the original Naruto series: he was strong, but he was also weak.

The fun of reading a crossover for me, especially if it's one with powers, is seeing how the different power systems interact and how a native user of that power system could survive in this new place with this power system. So, in the back of my head, if the tailed beasts are always walking around, and especially if he's friends with a mad scientist, it leads to potentially everyone getting chakra, which some stories do, and it takes away some of the specialness of Naruto as a character.

Today, I read a story where Naruto kinda had chakra, and it was a Walking Dead crossover. That one was done really well. Nobody else got chakra, and the compelling part was that it leaned more heavily on Naruto being a ninja, not using jutsu, just stealth and speed and how he can maneuver around the zombies. They didn't have him sticking to roofs to travel from point A to point B in the group. He clung to the undersides of cars and he slowly learned how to speak English, which again is very human and doesn't just beat us over the head with "Naruto has chakra, so he can overpower everything." So even a little bit of chakra doesn't turn me off from a story.

Anyways, TL;DR: You're a phenomenal author with a phenomenal vision. I just cannot stick around for that vision because of my inability to enjoy the nuances of it. I hope to see you write more crossovers with Naruto, hopefully where you don't have him share chakra or release the tailed beasts. Continue to keep writing compelling and human characters. Continue to keep the nuance in the flow. Instead of telling us everything, you show us. Instead of huge exposition dumps, you let it stretch on, sometimes for a bit too long, but otherwise, it's perfect.