Reviews for New Devil of The Gremory House |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So has kurama just become useless? Like naruto could use the sacred gear without kurama and it doesnt seem any stronger so did he just give up access to the tailed beast chakra so kurama could talk? This seems so stupid |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome update as always |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like you just shouldve had more build up to naruto joining them, like a slow burn or something instead of this stuoid azazel capture thing as an excuse for him to not be part of this arc its really boring |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like maybe this is supposed to seem cute by rias but the way youve written naruto how is he not mad at all by this, he screams at issei for bothering him and just goes with rias forcing him to do things all of sudden. Seems way ooc from the way you wrote him just a chapter prior more importantly it makes rias look terrible like its quite literally stalking and harrassing at this point and i hate that hes just giving in. You shouldve just made him into the idea right from the beginning if you were gonna make him change his mind right away |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm still here, great. Rias is probably worried that once the news reaches her, we will probably see it in the next chapter (hopefully sooner). You also need to add more Roswesise scenes with Naruto, you made them quite well in the previous chapter. |
![]() ![]() Creo que Koneko acaba de describir el destino de cada dragón que conoce en su mundo |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter x8 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh boy this chapter was really good, thanks for the update, I felt like it was quicker than I expected and good instruction for Rizevin for the next arc. I already want Naruto to be able to see his parents, I'm sure it won't be in the next chapter or the next, but I hope it's soon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, seems someone's interest in Naruto has increased not good anyways keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, the further I progress through chapter 69 I just feel more and more disappointed because, compared to previous chapter 68 which was a 10, chapter 69 with all it's character and writing inconsistency feels like a 4-6, especially when it comes to Naruto confronting Euclid who just tormented Gasper and Koneko. If the author by chance reads my comments, please know that I don't intended to make you feel bad. I just know that, as a long time reader of this story who's looked forward to every chapter release, you can do so much better than this. I am disappointed but still hopeful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say, while I adore this story, it feels like the quality in writing has seriously gone down lately. It's as if the author is rushing to get these chapters out. One chapter will be amazingly written while the next will feels rushed. It just makes reading chapters like these wierd since I know the author is capable of so much better. Coming off the heels of chapter 68 which was impeccabley written, chapter 69 just feels like it was hastily written with a lot of run on sentences which is unfortunate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter |