Reviews for New Devil of The Gremory House |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I must say, while I adore this story, it feels like the quality in writing has seriously gone down lately. It's as if the author is rushing to get these chapters out. One chapter will be amazingly written while the next will feels rushed. It just makes reading chapters like these wierd since I know the author is capable of so much better. Coming off the heels of chapter 68 which was impeccabley written, chapter 69 just feels like it was hastily written with a lot of run on sentences which is unfortunate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cannot get over how Naruto's sacred gear is basically a dollar store Izanami in the best way possible. You are an awesome writer my friend! |
![]() ![]() ![]() based on the ending, are we gonna see ninja seals involved with trihexa? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm this is gettting very interesting and Son Goku has finally pacted with Ravel which was exciting to see. I'm looking forward to how she will incorporate lava into her arsenal going forward. |
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![]() ![]() How were they able to see the Eight Trigrams Seal through Naruto’s Shirt? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Son finally acknowledges Ravel as his "Neo-Jinchuuriki" and a really powerful devil has a "Boosted-Gear" copy, such power house's. Good read and I look forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm nervous about that cliffhanger you've made at the end about Euclid's observation on Naruto's sealing mark. That seems ominous. theDOGS (Hiroyuki Sawano) See it on the people's faces everywhere Black and blue, but they won't throw the towel in And let go of a dream Man, women, child prepare to bleed Were we born to lose and let Goliath win? Heavy air, screaming as you pull the pin Our world is collapsing, but we can rebuild it A hundred more years in the fire Do you believe that we can just kill them all? Do you believe that we can conquer this? Can't delete all the mess that I have seen Fall in the fire, but these burns will heal you Gonna take your knives and skills, they must be honed Show your mom your lives and give a dog a bone Just wait for centuries Man, woman, child long to be free When we die, we ask our brothers one more time If the meaning of our lives was worth a dime Our world oxidizes, but will surprise us A hundred more years in the fire Do you believe that we can just kill them all? Do you believe that we can conquer this? Can't delete all the mess that I have seen Fall in the fire, but these burns will heal you Coming down to show you what to do How to die with honor, dignity We should delete all the mess out from our sight What is truth is for me and you Do you believe that we can just kill them all? Do you believe that we can conquer this? Can't delete all the mess that I have seen Fall in the fire, but these burns will heal you Coming down to show you what to do How to die with honor, dignity We should delete all the mess out from our sight What is truth is for me and you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome work please continue the story it's amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was really good, I'm already waiting for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope that near the end of story Sasuke and sona get together |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Goooooooooooood. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cinema. |