Reviews for New Devil of The Gremory House |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Some of the youngest of our group have been taken and Shukaku got to let loose for once! I'm looking forward to the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter, so the magician from the defunct khaos brigade kidnapped the all the kid looking devils. can't wait for naruto come to rescue and kick their asses badly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So now we get Euclid huh. Can't wait to see how this interaction is going to turn out next chapter! Jackson 5 (I saw Mommy's kissing Santa Claus) Wow! Mommy's kissing Santa Claus! I saw Mommy kissing Santa Claus (kissing, kissing Santa Claus) Underneath the mistletoe last night She didn't see me creep Down the stairs to have a peep She thought that I was tucked up In my bedroom, fast asleep Then I saw Mommy tickle Santa Claus (tickle, tickle, Santa Claus) Underneath his beard so snowy white Oh, what a laugh it would have been If daddy had only seen Mommy kissing Santa Claus last night He saw Mommy kissing (kissing, kissing) Santa Claus I did! I really did see Mommy kissing Santa Claus And I'm gonna tell my dad Then I saw Mommy tickle Santa Claus (tickle, tickle Santa Claus) Underneath his beard so snowy white Oh, what a laugh it would have been If daddy had only seen Mommy kissing Santa Claus last night Oh, what a laugh it would have been If daddy had only seen Mommy kissing Santa Claus last night I did! I did! I really did see Mommy kissing Santa Claus You gotta believe me! You just gotta believe me! Come on, fellas, believe me! You just gotta believe me! Come on, you gotta believe me! |
![]() ![]() Why do they need Ravel when they have so many clones of her family? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to Chapter 69. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story but its starting to feel like its dragging, i get wanting to keep us informored and give every little detail of the journey but it isnt always the best move, but you could just time skip and then catch us up with brief flashbacks. Or allude to it like they did with the time skip in between ‘Naruto’ and ‘Naruto:Shippuden’ Just get back to the meat of the story bro enough world building |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it, good chapter. It was very good, I'm already waiting for the next chapter. Merry Christmas and happy holidays. |
![]() ![]() ![]() merry christmas and happy holidays to you as well. also can't wait for what's next |
![]() ![]() What do they want to test on the others back at the school? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this story years ago, and I thought it was abandoned. I am happy to discover that it is not. just right now, I am rereading it to catch up, I am on chapter 50. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job keep it up |
![]() ![]() Nevermind got the answer. Sweet akeno chan. Huh. |
![]() ![]() Wait what does C stands for if not chicken? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shit is about to get real it seems |
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