Um, Where is Naruto? Im confused.
If you wanted to write an OC thats awesome, do that, I'd read that.
But dont try to pass this guy of as Naruto, nothing is right, crossover are just that, crossovers, not an OC with the same name that you will eventually give the same skills to.

Looking forward to Chapter 67.

After rereading this, I kinda just realized that the old devils were right to exclude Natuto from the rating games. He was never actually part of Rias’s peerage in the first place. She was just the one who gave him the ptototype piece out of coincidence. It wasn’t even a part of the set she was given. She can’t track him, promote him, teleport him, or anything else a king can do with their pieces. He did contracts for her, but any Gremory affiliated devil could fo that.

Looking forward to Chapter 67.

bro, my mind is once again blown, what an ending

mind blown

Been reading on and off since 2015. Good story, thanks for still continuing it. Looking forward to where it goes from here with Indra.

ok it seems after reading the comment i may have not said it clearly so i was meant was can you add some thing to shake the story like bleach rn with cour 3 and add arcs. also can you make some characters ooc like venelana and grayfia cause we almost dont see what they can do. like in the devil ninja fanfic they add things to cannon to make things different from the same kinds of self insert naruto x dxd fanfics and in roots of hope fanfic they add oc's and explore the world and are very descriptive. i know this is a lot to asked when no one is forcing you to do the fanfic but i would be nice bacause i feel like the chapters have become shorter and can you plz do the Q&A because some of us really want to get info on what you plan. again not really saying you have to, it is a suggestion and thank you for the fanfic i discovered the fic on youtube and when it stop making videos on past the kokabiel arc i was sad and searched for this for months you are one of the most talented writers i have ever seen. until next time and if you do add the suggestion to the fanfic i can help i was think of many things to add i have my own document on things i would add but until then bye

hey bro i know im not the one who writes this fanfic but i was thinking you can add things not shown in the light novels for example grayfia training rias bloodlusted like unohana from bleach and an arc from you to develop the cast and make us love more also sorry to ask this but can you add more descriptions like when you said naruto was covered in his chakra cloak it was hard to desern if you meant kcm or kcm 2 and what abilities look like because we have no visuals and have to imagine what it would look like. again it is just a suggestion you dont have to do it but it would be appreciated

I am stay here and waiting

Nice break before the potential ish hits the fan.

Interested in seeing just how Naruto will interact with his parents if it works

PUT AKENO IN NARUTO'S HAREM ALREADY! SERIOUSLY ! PLEASE!

... Huh, no progress on Minato and Kushina in this chapter that's a shame.

Woohoo! Onto the next arc we go!

RWBY (Lionize)

Taunted and tortured
Insulted and reviled
Enthralled by human overlords
Since I was a child
Surrounded by weaklings
Pathetic and oppressed
Satisfied to gnaw on scraps
Afraid to leave the nest
Won't apologize for
Retribution
Punishment is
Well-deserved

Subjugate, humiliate and rob us of our pride
Watch them fall as I am glorified

You'll see
I'm their hero
I'll be lionized
I have
The strength to do what's needed
Unify our people with no compromise
Champion the truth until they recognize
Lead them to salvation and regain our lives

Behold your flaccid leaders
Too weak to take the prize
Replace them with a warrior
It's time we mobilize
Despose the feeble cowards
Heed this battle cry
Vengence on the human filth
The time is now we'll rise
Wandering through the life of
Destitution
Suffering is
Oversun

Terminate, annihilate, our enemies will stay
Destroy them all while I am glorified

I'm here
I'm your savior
I'll be lionized
I am
The path to reclamation
This world will have no peace
Until our dream is realized
No mercy
No compassion
Our fate's justified
Time to turn the table
On who's tyrannized

Thanks for the update, I really liked reading the process of how they brought Naruto's parents to life. The fact that Naruto is going to make a pact with Le Fay also made me laugh, I will be looking forward to the next update