Reviews for Reflection in Steel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is AMAZING, you should really continue it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A shame the story didnt continue, been unappreciated by the WH spittakers most likely, but I do have to commend the idea to use an AU future UNSC instead of anything canon. It's a lot better explaining how a 20k UNSC ship can survive an Emperor class instead of the Infinity. Fact of the matter is on youtube it's already been explained that Forerunners would ROFLstomp WH so a faction that makes use of Hybrid FTL, Shields and weapons from Covenant and Forerunner can and will stand up to the imperium if only slightly. Much more interested in the Journey aspect, like are their other gateways, will the emperor take notice of this new faction, what relation to the Tau would they have etc. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this so far! its great. |
![]() ![]() A T'au in melee? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh, no. The Flood can say good-bye to itself. |
![]() ![]() And many years have passed |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now, the real question is how many forerunners installations there in Warhammer, did the flood make it there? If yes, well chaos god and company can say bye bye to everything and that is not counting the fact that if the Monitors don’t recognise them as reclaimers |
![]() ![]() ![]() :c |
![]() ![]() ![]() I heavily enjoyed this, sad it’s dead |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Hopefully I won't keep you waiting as long for the next chapter." Updated: Feb 27, 2015 Current date: Feb 13, 2021 Six years have passed and no update. Pffffffttt... hahahahaha! At least have the decency to declare the story dead so someone else can adopt it. |
![]() ![]() I am honestly disappointed you needed the imperium so badly i can't truly believe it they call this story a balanced crossover the UNSC is OP is not really entertaining for me this story does not deserve a TV tropes recommendation |
![]() ![]() One major piece of advice and a few nit picks. The big advise is that you really need to use some form of line break when you do a perspective shift even if it's just a line of ''s or '_'s there was more than one point where I got very confused by a scene transition. Personally for this fic I'd more advise something more elaborate such as... _ System Planet _/Ship Location Time Possibly even specifying the unit that we're following due to the fact Halos and Warhams are going to be in close quarters in the future. As far as minor nitpicks go, las-weapons don't have a recoil, I think you might want to check a video about Tau military tactics because I saw very little of their typical tactics in this, and lastly maybe describe the location the battle is taking place in better because I'm not sure if it's a hive city, a normal city, or just an outlying feeder village atm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very engaging fic |
![]() ![]() Loved this, would also love it if you wrote some more lol, but seriously good work. |