Reviews for A Harsh Reality
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3
Yay! i love it. I have never liked lemon anyway, it was always weird.
RexCaldoran chapter 62 . 1/1
well some part of me is still hoping that ur inspiration and motivation for this one coming back at some point.
well hope dies at last.
Rwby Arc chapter 62 . 11/6/2017
What will be the end?
Rwby Arc chapter 20 . 11/5/2017
I love the stories where Mr. Schnee isn't an asshole and a scum
Rwby Arc chapter 17 . 11/5/2017
It was a decent first lemon.
But aside from that,a very nice chapter
Guest chapter 13 . 10/2/2017
ren the omnipotent
Guest chapter 13 . 3/28/2017
Yang xiao long always hurts weiss,can yang go die?
Kaichoulover chapter 2 . 3/24/2017
Goddammit that ending was perfect. Kudos to weiss
xNaruHina chapter 15 . 1/28/2017
So basically Yang has a habit of spreading her legs for most guys on the first date has sex with them then drops them? Wow.
xNaruHina chapter 13 . 1/28/2017
This whole Yang/Weiss thing is getting extremely old really fast. Yang sleeps with Blake and Ruby already Rolf her she's fine. Yang seriously needs to back off already.
xNaruHina chapter 6 . 1/28/2017
I don't think I like Weiss much .-.
xNaruHina chapter 2 . 1/28/2017
Uhh, can you pick one POV?
yuriko777 chapter 31 . 11/3/2016
you know when the guy said I am Grimm it reminded me of I am Groot
TigerCritic chapter 52 . 8/15/2016
So far I'm not like the way the characters are portrayed. The plot could use a few tweaks and you have a few details wrong. There are a lot of plot holes and I fear you're making grimm too overpowered. Otherwise it's an twist with an intricate plot, maybe it's just not for me.
watchMoreAnimeYouMust chapter 17 . 7/24/2016
This was definitely not bad seeing as how it was your first attempt at a Lemon. Don't force yourself to write it though. Having a lemon in a story is like adding a spice to a recipe, it might add flavour, but it shouldn't define the overall experience.
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