|Reviews for Unintentional Occlumency|
| Jolteongrl chapter 1 . 9/10
| Jolteongrl chapter 1 . 9/10
| Whatstoknow chapter 6 . 8/16
I think this story is doing just fine. Follow canon, add your own stuff in for a few laughs, and just pretty much just keep doing what your doing now. I like it. Others seem to as well, judging by the follows and favs. Anyway, stay toasty! :)
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/29
i'm surprised he didn't just group Gaara in the same "school team" as Naruto, i mean that's a lot of pandering to small outsider schools for no particular reason, i mean, plot-wise there's no reason for both of them to participate without kinda ruining the whole thing (Gaara's attacks are pretty borring! and wouldn't he be more like the stand-in headmaster since he's not a student?)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/29
idk if i like this characterisation of Naruto, she's just so... well, an immature airhead worst than her male counterpart from before the war... but there's some hope her interactions with the wizards will be interesting at least - onwards!
| BeingHere1 chapter 6 . 7/26
This has been my favorite Naruto-competes-in-triwizard-tournament story so far and I really hope you continue writing. I think that some people from Konoha (Tenten, Kiba, Lee, etc.) should come to support Naru. I really enjoy when the Hogwarts students are shocked! Maybe some dark wizard can appear during the Triwizard Tournament and Naru and Gaara will kill him/her. Or maybe that's how the others will appear: someone attacks Naru/Gaara when, for some reason, they can't defend themselves and one of the other ninjas will save them by killing the attacker.
Anyways, I bet you'll make this story amazing!
| Notactualyaguest chapter 6 . 7/26
Hello! I am not actually a guest, but am simply to lazy to log on!
I really like your story and I hope for the next chapter to come out soon:)
| Copper001 chapter 6 . 6/26
Just put them throw the try Wizard tournament. It could be really cool if you had kubiu (I know that not how you spell his name but I forget how to so sorry) show up and start hagging out with nuirko and graar. And have the twins be like two over protective brother- because they would not like them because they are no-kill people so yeah.
| Perzoe3 chapter 6 . 6/16
Gaara x Naruto
It's ok if you take some time off, it's understandable :)
but, we will always be ready to read your next chapter when you upload!
| ALEXAROUGE chapter 1 . 6/12
dattebane, no L
| Copper001 chapter 5 . 6/10
| KaixDecayx chapter 6 . 6/7
Can't wait for an update.. I'm starting to fall in love with the idea of Naru gaara simply because even if the twins are pranksters at heart, Naru is stronger than them and naruto never really pays attention to people who are weaker than her to me. Its like modern day dating or rather mating cycles lol. She's looking for the strongest mate to be with essentially. Thats just the way I see it with she acts with the boys around her. It's like this basically.. A strong woman needs a strong man. I can't really see the twins doing anything other than the joke shop which makes me see their relationship as close friendship/ best friends. Possibly..
| Angella1012 chapter 6 . 4/29
I really love this story and since your asking for ideas, I'll try to dish out a few.
You could have Sakura, Lee, Shikamaru, and Tsunade(Or Kakashi) show up, with Lee in his typical 'youthful' fashion and either Kakashi reading porn(In which Sakura would hit him on the head) or Tsunade coming in with a sake bottle and Sakura shaking her head with a sigh.
Another thing could be that Naruko could end up questioning Professor Moody's teaching and when shown the killing curse be a bit like "That's what everyone's worked up against? Seriously, you wizards are such scaredy cats dattebayo!" and then go on a rant on all of the ways to 'torture, kill, and eat ramen'
Another scenario could be Naruko making fun of Snape, calling him an "Older and weaker teme, dattebayo! He's all moody and that 'better then you' feel!"
You could do a quidditch scene with Gaara making a remark on how "They actually have something semi-useful."
Another thing could be with Sakura, Lee, and Shikamaru coming to Hogwarts and Lee terrifies everyone with his awesome speed.
Those might help you a bit? Keep up the great work, and if you do end up discontinuing the story please tell us!
| phantomlady13 chapter 6 . 4/28
What I want to see ?!
hmm...how about house unity ?! with naruto there to be the bridge ?! There'll be Drarry ?! Naruto be the champion ? She'll kick voldie ass...with Harry's help too of course *puppyeyes*
Oh...I want to see how Naru n Gaara fight againts A Dragon too *giggles*
Or how will they survive under water ?!
That's it for now , maybe later I will PM you if I have other idea *wink*
Ganbatte ne !
| phantomlady13 chapter 4 . 4/28
NaruxGaara please *puppyeyes*