Reviews for Breath, Just Breath
punky warhammer chapter 2 . 10/6/2014
and this is where you leave it?
arrrgggg! finish it, please!
so good!
NewBlueTrue chapter 2 . 1/21/2014
this is really good, the beginning was terror wrenching and terrifying and i absolutely loved. please continue with the awesome story…
seungkwan chapter 2 . 1/2/2014
This is definitely intriguing and I'd like to read more of it. Please continue with the story! :)
Alex765 chapter 2 . 12/27/2013
Amazing what can I say a great start also a wonderful writing style you were able to capture the fear it was so real . please continue I have a feeling that this is going to be an outstanding heart touching story and please excuse my English it is not my first language :D