Reviews for Jaune's Legacy
This is chapter 31 . 4/15
kind of boring you know, you've stretched the training Montague waaay to long. No real story development and the writing isn't really that polished, there's no show. It all tell with some average dialogue and melodramatic characterisation without even building the atmosphere. at all.
dracohalo117 chapter 10 . 4/9
Wonder how Weiss is gonna react to this...

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dracohalo117 chapter 9 . 4/9
Pyrrha is pissed, and Weiss thinks this whole bet was Jaune's idea...

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dracohalo117 chapter 6 . 4/9
Awwww, that was adorable...

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dracohalo117 chapter 4 . 4/9
Interesting, so, in this Ozpin was a shitty leader...now he teaches students, how so very much has changed.

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dracohalo117 chapter 3 . 4/9
That was a fun chapter to read...

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dracohalo117 chapter 2 . 4/9
YOU JELLY!

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dracohalo117 chapter 1 . 4/9
Daaaaawwww

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Guest chapter 45 . 3/30
Please update this story and please do a triangle with Jaune Ruby and Pyrra
Guest chapter 45 . 3/24
Please update
Aeron56 chapter 45 . 1/12
:( are you going to be posting a new one soon? im reaaly wanting to see the part where jaunes oblivious to his harem and maybe ren and that antisocial girl
Selias chapter 1 . 1/12
It could use some spelling and grammar work. For example, "yea" is not the same thing as "yeah." "Yea" is pronounced the same as "yay," and is almost exclusively used in "yea or nay" voting, these days.
AnAustralianGamer chapter 45 . 11/5/2014
*Throws nuke at Un4givingCarnage with Continue written on the side.*
Operator Blake 'Roxasrock chapter 45 . 11/4/2014
I think the story is perfectly fine so far. I say start some romance up, and update soon!
ShafferJL chapter 45 . 10/30/2014
Please continue on with this story, been following it from day 1, didn't see much of a reason to drop a review since you were doing a great job on this story. Continue being an awesome person :)
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