|Reviews for Encoded|
| Nightshade's sydneylover150 chapter 5 . 6/30
This is absolutely adorable! How many virtual cookies do I have to send for another chapter? I know you're rocking Supernatural right now but... Cute little Vulcan!
I hope you write some more in the future!
| keltieful chapter 5 . 6/28
That first scene, oh lordy. Sweet and domestic with a hint of sexy, a la Spock. You know how to make a girl feel ... ahem. :b
I really like the way you write in original characters. They're never annoying OC's. Iria is really awesome. I hope we get to see her again sometime.
That parental bond. How did they not see this coming? How will it effect Jim in the long term? I can't imagine Elonat being cleared to go into deep space on Enterprise. It really is too dangerous for such a young child. Even a little Vulcan. Does that mean Amanda, Sarek and Winona will have to look after him while Jim and Spock are out in the black?
I lovelovelove that while Jim asks any and everything about Vulcan children and Elonat, Spock's only interested in how it all will effect Jim. Even though he had the exact same bond with his own very human mother. Which Iria totally catches him out on. Someone's slipping up and showing that he cares.
Oh I love Amanda. This is going to be awesome. A mother's intuition is such a wonderful plot device. ;)
I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this story. It's an amazing premise, the plot and characterisation and well done so far and definitely interesting and your writing style is so nice. Have I convinced you to pick up a pen, laptop, PADD, etc. and start typing yet?
PS. The cards from Bones awesome.
| keltieful chapter 4 . 6/28
I try to keep some sort of order to my reviews but it keeps running away from me. I'm just following the order of my notes.
Spock acting like a dad. It's definitely up there with Jim and baby Vulcans. You've sent my fan-girl feels all over the place. It's just too cute. I love Spock.
And the flirting! How illogical. And sweet. It probably looks like regular ol' bickering to outsiders. But the teasing and touching and tucking Elonat in together. Sigh.
The lion is kinda sad and really quite touching. If it's not a reference to I'Chaya, I don't care. I see it as one anyway. Which would mean that the toy symbolises a lot to Spock. I wonder if Jim will ever learn about that.
Funnily enough, my mother once sent a whole loaf of bread flying all over some random man when she was little. As I heard it, grandma was not impressed. I can imagine Winona wouldn't have been either.
| keltieful chapter 3 . 6/28
At least Pike's having some fun.
The imagery in this chapter is superb. I can almost see the city in ruins, the forest, the hustle of the starship.
Does Jim just always conveniently forget that Vulcan's are telepaths? He feels something enter his mind and curl up there, yet he doesn't question it or mention it to Spock... It just seems like something you'd want to ask about, at least with another Vulcan. And wouldn't it be obvious to a another Vulcan that the munchkin is connecting with Kirk on some telepathic level? Smart people can be so dumb.
I think the -frankly ridiculous and possibly unhealthy- amount of love I have for this fic is mostly based around the indisputable fact that Jim Kirk holding a baby Vulcan is about the best thing ever. Bonus points for making him both act like a doting mother and resemble LS's mum. At this rate, I might die for over exposure to adorabubbleness.
Little Spock, he is Avarik's son, isn't he?
The attack, was it the people she was running away from by any chance?
| keltieful chapter 2 . 6/27
So, I'm guessing this is AUish? No Nero?
I love your characterisation. The dynamic between Jim and Bones is just perfect. I like the softer, parental side of Bones. He's very sweet, in his own gruff way.
Jim himself is cute. I like the emphasis on his intellect - and that it doesn't automatically mean he knows everything. I like the little dimensions his character has. He feels very real. Awesome work.
Spock. Spock. Spock. I love how much of a grumble he is. So strict and stern and sassy and Vulcan. Poor Spock. No one gets the nuances of his personality yet.
To be honest, it doesn't really sound like Spock hates Jim. It seems more like he's trying to give him challenges and keep him interested and occupied. Does that make sense? I'm sure a loud person like Kirk wouldn't have had any trouble mentioning that he already knows everything they're studying. Plus, being as super smart as Spock is, he can probably relate in some weird way. At least, that's what I see.
| keltieful chapter 1 . 6/27
I love this story so much that I'm coming back, reading it again and reviewing every chapter. Maybe I can help coax you back to working on it?
This is a great prologue. You've got me, hook, line and sinker.
I really want to know more about Aravik. I mean, obviously who she was running from and what her research is but also who she was. Her morals and where she's from, her parents, friends, etc.
You have a wonderful writing style. It's very concise and easy to read. There's an ambience to the scene that most writers can't convey with such consistency.
| J-town chapter 5 . 6/19
...are you going to update?
I absolutely love this story! I think Elonat is adorable and Jim and Spock's "relationship" is very sweet.
| Dora chapter 5 . 6/16
I love your story! Please update soon another chapter...
and don't you dare to abandon it :)
| catbob1 chapter 5 . 5/30
How can you not be happy with this chapter? It is fan-tas-tic! It's been so loooong. Hope you can continue this. Real life intrudes and sometimes you can't do as you want to but I sincerely hope you can come back to this story. Thank you for sharing your time and talent. Kudos.
| Candi87 chapter 5 . 4/6
Wow! I love this story. Even though this an AU you kept enough of their actual personalities that it is realistic. I love that they did not fall in love immediately and as their bond with the baby grows theirs does as well. And baby spock is so cute. I hope that you keep writing this.
| Yuki-Hime333 chapter 5 . 3/24
I love it your story and the twists and turns! I can not wait to read the next chapter!
| xxxwallflowerxxx chapter 5 . 3/19
I hope you will update as soon as you can.
| Kaseytrue chapter 5 . 3/10
I must admit that my first thought when I finished this chapter was rather strange and so out there that I must record it.
Oh my holy mother of horseradish sauce.
Yes ... I know completely illogical and highly strange.
In Kasey Lingo that means I love this so very much please update soon.
| 08FanfictionAddiction chapter 5 . 3/8
omg dont just leave me hanging! I need moar :3
| ravensterling123 chapter 5 . 3/2
Hey this story is SO good like honestly, it's one of my favorites! Thank you for writing it and it would be awesome if you continued to update it :D Hope you have a lovely day