Reviews for He's Not Dead Yet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, i agree with what you did with filch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is convicing me to go watch all monty python movies. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Laughed so hard |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the ride, that was a funny read. Well, I had. A blast to be honest. This kind of stories are exactly why I like reading HP fanfics :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() great fun ! |
![]() ![]() Love the story! Thank you for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had almost forgotten that the Tournament was still a thing in this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Every addition of Monty Python to this story makes it worse, not better. Invariably. It's not funny. It's intrusive. It doesn't fit into the story at all, and takes me out of the moment every time. This story does fit the "parody" category by being a cliche bash-fic, which most bash-fics don't actually admit, but so far I haven't seen any actual humor. I've seen lots of attempts at humor, every single one of which fell flat. And all the rest is... well, I've read it a hundred times in better bash-fics, so I guess I'll go do that instead. I wanted this to be something that it's not, and I give up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The idea that Hermione, at 13, has the right to give Harry "a telling-off" for anything he did, especially an accident, and that she regularly gives him "playful whacks" is not endearing. She's awful, and you're making her potentially worse than she was even in canon. She's just showed up in this story and I already hate her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was the trial supposed to be funny? Because it comes off as entirely idiotic. Trying to shoehorn in Python-esque humor into a serious event just results in complete tonal dissonance for the scene, and I skipped most of it once I realized it was just going to be more of the same lame humor. The rest of this chapter, though cliche, was fine. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVED this story. I loved the humor and sometimes the outright hysterics of it all. Harry chose some great girls to be with even though he was clueless most of the time when it comes to the opposite sex. I'm so glad you didn't do the marriage of all of them until the last 2 chapters, and I Loved your big telling of what everyone did in the far future. Thanks so much for writing it. Take care and be well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dark Lord is a….Wombat? Bwhahahahahahahaha! Take care and be well |
![]() ![]() ![]() NEVER, NEVER SEEN THIS BEFORE! Ron Weasley or Draco Malfoy participating in the Twiwizard Tournament. It's so shocking! Onward I read. Take care and be well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have read other stories where Harry is the heir of one or two of the Founders of Hogwarts. This is the first time he's all 4 and has to marry 6 wives. That's somewhat extreme. Onwards I read. Take care and be well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wait, luna animangus form is Fou-kun? |