Reviews for He's Not Dead Yet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sanity is just a word, and I don't always keep my word. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sirius: The DogFather Harry: The Pro Protagonist Dumbledore: The Dumb Goat Ron, Molly, Ginny: The Trio Of Greed Hermione: The Bookwormer Luna: The Eccentric Seer Daphne, Tracey: The Duo Of Sisters Fay: The Athletic Fairy |
![]() ![]() ![]() An easy-go story, I know it about humor but got six wiwes and no one rejected was a sheer dumb luck after all. And absolutely no romance smut lemon of all kind at all... You're so rude. Any way, thank for a good comedy, you must label it SERIOUSLY IDIOT RONALD WEASLEY. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I supposed you wrote so hilariously but the way the monster of Arhhhhh disappeared confused me so much? Anyone can explain what happened to me? And what is the Arhhhhh? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I realize that I'm several years late with this comment but, I keep hoping that someone will substitute the name Albus Dumbledore with Harry Potter and in this case, it would have made for a much lively tournament if Tom Riddle was substituted on the paper delivered by Draco. I think this would have been far more fun than adding Ron and Draco; they are both no-talent braggarts. |
![]() ![]() Gotta say, death eaters getting run down with an RV some of the funniest shit I’ve ever read |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s like you couldn’t help but throw every single cliche into a mixing pot. If you didn’t have a list of all the possible Harry Potter cliches and weren’t checking them off as you wrote this story, then I’ll shoot myself in the foot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() second times read and still enjoying me... |
![]() ![]() ![]() J’ai adorée vraiment |
![]() ![]() ![]() The last line is killer |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am loving this story, but, I am not to fond of your ideas for magical candy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, a wombat is less humiliating than McVoldemort clown look. Although less scary as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's my only complaint otherwise this chapter and all the previous chapters OMG you're one of the greatest writers that I have the pleasure of reading well done on this story I can't wait to see what the epilogue is like |
![]() ![]() ![]() this chapter is almost perfect you only have one problem you forgot to put the chapter number luckily the system handled the situation fine but there's no chapter thing in the beginning like chapter 1 chapter 2 excetera |
![]() ![]() something about the last part made me laugh so hard |