Reviews for He's Not Dead Yet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Repair and returned the stolen artifacts I'd hope. 2 names were mentioned for heirship but neither was Black. Otherwise great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great chapter. Only shame I can think of atm is the lack of bringing up that expensive Basilisk corpse that he most definitely never sees any profit from. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm wondering if I read the original or not. I spammed several HP stories recently including one with a similar opening that mentioned the number of times Molly wouldve gone to the platform. I hope that's just another and the original I read wasnt deleted. Too many times I've come across thise doing rewrites they say would be better. Aside from dropped them before they catch up to their previous spot they ALWAYS end up worse. Do not understand why people feel the need to delete the original work and not just lost the new version separately. Half asleep and gotta go out but off the top of my head I wouldve requested some ultimate healing magic. Heal anything short of reviving the dead. Injuries, illnesses, curses, etc. Metamorph sounds like a waste unless you want to be a spy. Heck couldve been a magic savant. Able to master magic with ease and develop his own. Including runes and the like. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i don't get why some people hate the fannon name sirius calls harry, "pup". i think it's cute, and it's just another thing to show them being close and for sirius not seeing harry as his father |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved the black knight reference (favorite part of that movie) |
![]() ![]() ![]() nobody ever expects the goblin inquisition (even when warned before hand) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Ill never let that happen!" "Is there anything we can do?" C'mon Harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg the description is good but... Paired with 6 girls is a no for me. God why do people love harem so much? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, this was definitely an amusing piece. However you really should tag Monty Python in the blurb or something. At any rate I spent a good deal of this amused and liked how it turned out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still so funny! I read it again every year or so. The people that complain a Harry Potter Monty Python parody has Monty Python in it are just not the brightest bulbs. Hope you are doing well. Thank you again for writing! |
![]() ![]() Yep to Molly and love potions. That thing with Ginny did come from left field in a hurry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() why does everyone make Ron the villain in these oh my god. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m unfamiliar with Monty Python, unfortunately, but I’ve enjoyed whatever you’ve been doing with it here. Wanted to give you the (hopefully pleasant) reminded that for every negative comment or complaint about something, there’s likely a number of people who enjoy whatever the complaint was about and thought its brilliance was so obvious that it didn’t need to be commented on. Good job and I’m loving the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What’s really sad is that Omake isn’t too far off from reality for some families. I’ve actually experienced that Omake from Bill’s point of view. More subtlety on my mother’s part, but still. Going home can be a bucket of stress. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for writing such an entertaining novel, alas all good things must come to an end and what an end indeed, splended writing and I hope to see more quality writing in the future from you. |