Reviews for He's Not Dead Yet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What’s really sad is that Omake isn’t too far off from reality for some families. I’ve actually experienced that Omake from Bill’s point of view. More subtlety on my mother’s part, but still. Going home can be a bucket of stress. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for writing such an entertaining novel, alas all good things must come to an end and what an end indeed, splended writing and I hope to see more quality writing in the future from you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shame the omake in this chapter wasn't part of the main plot, would be pretty amusing keeping that going. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m the same way, have a huge crush on Charlie. I mean he works with dragons of all things! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know that this is only a humor fic and a really good one but there are things that really bugged me off. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh let me add the fact that he really sounds like a 13 year old despite actually being 17. Its good and all if he's really trying to sound like 13 but there's no mention of that so far. And when I said he sounds like 13 I also mean that he has the wisdom of a 13 year old not 17. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It feels like Harry only defends his friends from Ron because he feels he like he had to, but not because for the sake of defending them. It's so half-hearted and not sincere at all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i enjoyed the story again.1 problem with dates that i noticed ,all hallows eve is at the end of calendar year ,not the school year. continuity problem ,minor! libby .all the best |
![]() ![]() ![]() the plague joke did not age well with how covid happened |
![]() ![]() ![]() going on a limb here and guess the rabbit is luna by why else would she be covered in blood after a scene of a rabbit killing death eater or i could be wrong i have been awake for 24 hours maybe it's sleep time |
![]() ![]() ![]() thats nasty if you think about molly is giving arthor a potion that is keyed to ginny for harry to fall in love with her so if arthor drinks it would make him fall in love with his own daughter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i don't understand how voldy is considered the greatest dark lord when he could not even take over one country hell dumbldore's butt buddy did a better job then voldy as a dark lord. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah the whole death eaters wanting to kill half bloods never made sense to me because if that was the case voldy or a death eater would have killed snape instead of letting him join since snape is a half blood. other then that good read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() degenaration curse thought it was a rotting curse on the ring other then that good read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good read |