|Reviews for Bargaining|
| cm chapter 3 . 10h ago
absolutely wonderful chapter
| Enjoyingstory chapter 21 . 11h ago
Thank you very much for your story. It is clear and easy to follow. You have the characters down very well. The pace flows The movies don't fleash out enough and your story does very well. Please keep going. It eases my heart to read a happy Loki and Thor.
| Cai chapter 21 . 3/12
Wonderful. I really love this fic, it's definitely one of my favouites! Also, I'm requesting a sequel right now if you're open to that. I can't imagine not waiting for another chapter of this verse to come out every week.
I'm actually a little surprised it's been about two years since Loki began his bargain. It certainly felt like it was shorter, I supposed mainly due to time skips and other intrigue. Everything felt like it was really well paced and just kept doing, being interesting. So I guess the slower parts during the skip weren't necessary?
Hope you're having a great week! Thank you.
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/11
I beg of you, update! Update!
| Nightengale chapter 21 . 3/10
This story is amazing. I can't wait for more.
| Liv chapter 21 . 3/10
I'm really conflicted about how to feel about your Loki. On the one hand, he did such awful things (killing his brother!), but on the other, he's trying so hard to make amends... You've written him very well.
| JordieBElizabeth chapter 21 . 3/9
Loki is going to have a monster headache when he wakes up.
And Loki is finally getting somewhere with Odin! Though masquerading as Thor was a low blow. Anyway, I still love it! Can't wait to see what state Asgard is in when Loki wakes up. Did all their precautions work?
| Kekeh chapter 21 . 3/9
In most of the stories I don't like the Odin, but I admit that he and Loki are more similar than they admit. In a way, I would like to have some understanding between them before the order.
Anyway, this history is amazing, congratulations!
| sjane2015 chapter 21 . 3/9
The only thing that is stopping me from making a death threat to you is the hope of an early update. Preferably tomorrow or tye day after because if you don't by then, I think I will be in actual physical agony.
And I am already suffering enough from injures sustained in a fall from couple of days ago and a sprained ankle. So please be kind.
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/9
This chapter has ended at such a suitable yet annoying place, damn it. A good cliffhanger is still a cliffhanger. Anyway, both of the conversations are great, and I particularly love the part when Loki senses that Thor is not real. It makes me sad when I realize that in Thor 2, Loki and Frigga never had a proper, long conversation, so thanks for adding those talks and affections between them. I hope that there'll be an update soon, please, there is just too much suspense.
| sousie chapter 21 . 3/9
| Kesshichan chapter 21 . 3/8
Keeps getting better! This is such a great story!
| Adamzgal chapter 21 . 3/8
As much as I hated waiting for this chapter, it was indeed well worth the wait.
Like so many others, I loved "Odin as Thor" and of course how quickly Loki figured him out. It achieved the result all the same, because Loki realized he hadn't felt the witch when he mentioned Frigga would die.
The scenes between Odin and Loki and Frigga and Loki were simply fabulous. Heart-rending and heart-warming at the same time. Of course I truly love how Frigga nudges him into introspection and his realizations (FINALLY realizing that this Odin did prevent him from falling albeit in a different scenario) and even starting to have some bits of hope ... wonderful.
The scene with Algrim and Loki actually using the casket in front of the guards is, to me, yet one more bit of redemption for him and proof for Odin. Obviously the fact that a dark elf is there will probably be a huge thing in restoring some trust between Loki and Odin and hopefully eases the lingering doubts Odin still has about Loki's motives.
Of course I hated the cliff-hangar, but both the writer and reader in me recognize it as a natural chapter break. I only beg that you are able to finish chapter 22 SOON!
| sigyndenning chapter 21 . 3/8
Sorry, I can't log in while I'm at work, but I really wanted to review!
Can I just say that your Odin is probably the best Odin I've ever had the pleasure of reading? Gahh. Everyone in this story has their own perspective that is completely justified. I love that you touch on how hurt Odin is by Loki's anger and how hard Odin is trying. That makes me so sad. :(
This chapter was really intense though! Possibly my second favorite. :) thanks for posting.
| The Psychotic Queen chapter 21 . 3/8
Omgsh this is fantastic! More please! xD