Odin frustrates me so much that the end of this chapter just filled me with so much satisfaction that I laughed aloud. Brilliantly done.

I'm back again, because I love this story so much. You wrote it so well, and captured the characters personalities so beautifully. I'm sure I'll be back to read it a fourth time soon.

I loved the story

XD I love this version of insane Loki!

Amazing book so far!

I read this for the first time in 2014. I just finished reading it for the third time today. It is still as lovely as I remember! What a wonderful story!

Thank you for writing this. It was amazing

Still one of my favourite fics, even many years after I read it initially. It is utterly beautiful. I've loved all your fics in this fandom and this is most definitely the one of those that has lodged in my heart the deepest.

So much love that I can keep coming back to this again and again.

You should consider writing professionally.

Incorrect word usage. “Forgiveness” is the act of no longer hating or feeling anger toward someone. “Reconciliation” is the act of mending broken relationships, and requires effort from both parties, unlike forgiveness.

"And who told you this?" Odin says. "Was it Laufey? He is a liar, and you should not trust anything he says."

I like Odin as a good father, though misunderstood by Loki. This, however, seems like a good reason not to trust him. I’d say Loki wants to trust him, then.

Yeah, until you clarified this I half wondered if the witch could talk to him in his mind or something.

this book was epic amazing
it's One of the only few stories that have made me cry...

This was one of the most delightful stories I have read in a long time. Everything and I mean everything was perfect! The build up, the suspense, the DRAMA, the growth (so beautiful), the pain, the slow dreadful realization, and the bonds that were tested and newly forged. Every character felt real and it was oh so beautiful to see them in a new you for this excellent storytelling. You have a gift. One of my favorites by far! Marvel and Disney could definitely learn a thing or two from you.

So brilliant that I'm coming back to reread this only a week after I finished it. Couldn't stop thinking about it. I also cried a few times while reading it.