|Reviews for Ventriloquism|
| Nova of Mink chapter 6 . 1/19
Okay, I was going to continue reading, but I have changed my mind. Nightwing being murdered by the future love interest (split personality doesn't matter), is too much for me.
I don't feel that the character Jason Todd has given any reason to really like him and somehow overcome the emotions generated by Red X's actions and forgive him. You have tried to paint Nightwing as a jerk, but didn't take it far enough for me, as the audience, to hate him and not get angered over his death.
Later in the story, maybe you will redeem Jason, but it has come to late in the story for me. I needed to care about Jason before Dick's death.
So, I am done, but good luck with the rest of your story.
| tru-moo chapter 9 . 8/30/2014
cool story. some mistakes but cool anyway
| la canelle chapter 9 . 8/30/2014
Wow, just wow. I really enjoy this story so far. I can't wait for more.
| Raventink chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
OK, I just had to say, even if this story absolutely sucks balls (which I'm pretty sure it won't) and I hate it, that was truly one hell of a summary. I will read this story tomorrow, but when I saw this I was just like damn. I know I have to read this. Fantastic job man, fantastic job.
| Xaphrin chapter 9 . 8/18/2014
I know that this was a lot of set-up for the next chapter, but I absolutely loved the interactions between Jason and Raven. You do such an amazing job and pulling these two together, so I am super super excited to see where you take things.
| Kinji Blackstone chapter 8 . 6/21/2014
OMG we love this story 3! Soo sorry we haven't post for ever on your stories can't wait for your next great story. Thank you so much for taken your time to write these and again this was Wooot!
| ChristineDaae-ThePrincess chapter 8 . 4/16/2014
Yay! You updated! In Red X's pov at the end you wrote comma instead of coma. Just a helpful hint. Update soon and keep up the good work!
| anon chapter 8 . 4/15/2014
Bruce's at least physical and mental equals Wrath-William Mallory/Elliot Caldwell, Prometheus, Owlman, Sin/Zin Tzu, Constantine Drakkon, Onomatopoeia, Leader of Kobra, Ra's al Ghul's League of Assassins/Society of Shadows (the people he went to for training) David Cain Lady Shiva, Alpha etc, Men of Death Shellcase, Detonator etc, Claws of the Demon, Kyle Abbot; All Caste, Hush, Black Mask, Catman, King Snake, KGBeast, Deashot, Zsasz, and Professor Strange, Nobody-Morgan Ducard, Kyodai Ken, Red Claw, Bane, Slade
Bats has never beaten Slade without the aid of his sidekicks and even then after being distracted for like a second Slade escaped and left his sword as proof he could kill him whenever he wanted
Ulysses Hadrian Armstrong should be Sin/Zin Tzu's apprentice, Scorn- Wrath's apprentice, Cricket ten year old master assassin
Insider Bruce’s Red X-like ID-amazo like armor
Paladin alternative Bruce Wayne like Cowboy Punisher
Clone/spliced with Deadshot/Terraman/Jonah Hex/King Faraday/Slam Bradley/Tommy Monaghan/Terry Sloan/Matches Malone/Lefty Knox
Calamity his protégé
White Canary, Twelve Brothers in Silk, Marque, Annalea
Always wanted the Wilsons a happy family Rose Adeline's kid also, Slade an agent of Checkmate on a Taskforce X with David Cain, Cluemaster, Deadshot, and Sportsmaster seeking redemption to make their families proud of them, I ship Rose with Jason "Red Hood" Todd, I think Red X is Grant and he could be with a reformed Blackfire, Wintergreen their Alfred, Rex the Wonderdog or an equally powerful wolf named Tarot
Slade does have a code of honor he spends most of his time off panel going after terrorists and the like, he doesn't act against U.S. interests unless his family is threatened he does love them very much, the show made him a bwahaha villain and sadly the comics followed suit though he did state making his children hate him so the Titans would trust them and give them the home he couldn't
I always wanted Raven with Goth Boy him like Captain Marvel with Rorek and Malchior his dragon familiar or have them some kind of amalgam like Dante or virgil from Devil May Cry with guns, sword, guitar that makes lightning storms, magic briefcase/backpack/Santa's magic sack/bag cloak pull anything from, but black clothes or like a good teenage Dr. Doom/Lord Havok master of sorcery and superscience or from hidden kingdom that avoided White Martians' ancient experiments and thus stronger, tougher, and faster than Kryptonians like Vartox/Paragon as well as inherit white plasma on par with the Starheart/Shazam's magic lightning or Prince Stygia like kid Eternity, or a teenage Shadow (Kent Allard/Lamont Cranston) or Spider (Richard Wentworth) but like Edison Rex’s Eclipse I or Shine- Good teenage clone of Darkseid when he was still human looking spliced with Drax the Infinity Man and Highfather and Yuga Khan
Sunstone/Fortress of Solitude/Wonderdome/New Themyscira/Thalarion/Mythlands-Cosmopolitan, Multiethnic/Omniethnic/Citizenry of the Empire of the Silver Snake/Gem World/Skartaris/Nth Metal/Mother Box-Element X
| 11 chapter 7 . 4/6/2014
This is a wonderful story, very dark I love it! I really do hope that with nightwing out of the way red x/jason now has a chance with raven, mean I know but I love them so much I read every chapter anticipating some XRae sexy time but all I get is an angry Raven possibly out for revenge. Lol I didn't realize I was so mean until I found myself thinking along the same lines as X, nightwing really did seem to have everything it was always him, he had raven but also wanted starfire and he would have had them both too if X hadn't killed him. I'm sad nightwing's dead but just like X said even in death he still got all the attention, like seriously, but also I really loved what X's last words to nightwing were it was cruel as it was awesome,
'Goodbye, Nightwing. And don't stop at hell, I don't want to see you when I die'
Just awesome! Anyways, I really hope raven hears jason out and that they end up together, perhaps I'm asking for too much but I'm really hoping, definitely keeping my fingers crossed. So please update soon :D
| Xaphrin chapter 7 . 2/24/2014
I remember reading the first few chapters of this a long time ago, and for whatever reason it fell off my radar. I'm sad that it did, because I think you created something really, really good. It's dark and poetic, and a little bit twisted. I like the Jekyll/Hyde personalities that you've given Jason/X and I look forward to seeing what you do with this and where you take it. Considering that Jason has pretty much doomed himself (and subsequently, any chances at a relation ship with Raven) after he killed Nightwing. I look forward to an update.
| c1c2c3c4 chapter 7 . 2/23/2014
oh my jesus ya updated. you have been updating three stories in under one month! I'm telling ya you're getting better at this! (love this chapter!)
| SexyPepperoni chapter 7 . 2/23/2014
AW CRAP. Jason is one messed up guy here. I like it. I like the interactions in this chapter. The funeral was pretty vivid in my mind. Good job, Willow, good job.
| SexyPepperoni chapter 6 . 2/22/2014
... Nightwing? Killed? By gun? Same gun from last chapter? *twitches*
DA HELL, WILLOW, DA HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?! WHHYY, WILLOW?! YOU MUST FAVOR RED X MORE THAN NIGHTWING! AGGGHHHHHHHH. TOO MUCH excitement for me. I'll calm down. And now Raven is gonna go ape on Red X next time she sees him. Even if he is Jason or not. And what about this last part? Starfire? Don't ASSUME ANYTHING! UPDATE IS DEMANDED.
| SexyPepperoni chapter 5 . 2/22/2014
Ah, shit! Jason finally talked to Raven as himself instead of under the influence of Red X. YES! FINALLY! But what significance will the gun have? Hmmmm. What are you planning, TLSW?
| SexyPepperoni chapter 4 . 2/22/2014
You are very open with your age, TLSW. Eh, but that's your choice.
This chapter was exciting. Sexually. And I LOVE M-rated parts in stories. Onward!