|Reviews for Ventriloquism|
| Xaphrin chapter 7 . 2/24
I remember reading the first few chapters of this a long time ago, and for whatever reason it fell off my radar. I'm sad that it did, because I think you created something really, really good. It's dark and poetic, and a little bit twisted. I like the Jekyll/Hyde personalities that you've given Jason/X and I look forward to seeing what you do with this and where you take it. Considering that Jason has pretty much doomed himself (and subsequently, any chances at a relation ship with Raven) after he killed Nightwing. I look forward to an update.
| The-Fantasy-Controller chapter 7 . 2/23
oh my jesus ya updated. you have been updating three stories in under one month! I'm telling ya you're getting better at this! (love this chapter!)
| SexyPepperoni chapter 7 . 2/23
AW CRAP. Jason is one messed up guy here. I like it. I like the interactions in this chapter. The funeral was pretty vivid in my mind. Good job, Willow, good job.
| SexyPepperoni chapter 6 . 2/22
... Nightwing? Killed? By gun? Same gun from last chapter? *twitches*
DA HELL, WILLOW, DA HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?! WHHYY, WILLOW?! YOU MUST FAVOR RED X MORE THAN NIGHTWING! AGGGHHHHHHHH. TOO MUCH excitement for me. I'll calm down. And now Raven is gonna go ape on Red X next time she sees him. Even if he is Jason or not. And what about this last part? Starfire? Don't ASSUME ANYTHING! UPDATE IS DEMANDED.
| SexyPepperoni chapter 5 . 2/22
Ah, shit! Jason finally talked to Raven as himself instead of under the influence of Red X. YES! FINALLY! But what significance will the gun have? Hmmmm. What are you planning, TLSW?
| SexyPepperoni chapter 4 . 2/22
You are very open with your age, TLSW. Eh, but that's your choice.
This chapter was exciting. Sexually. And I LOVE M-rated parts in stories. Onward!
| SexyPepperoni chapter 3 . 2/22
Damn. A one word your story can be described. Da-yum!
| SexyPepperoni chapter 2 . 2/22
SHHHITTTTTTTTT, THIS STORY is the shit. Awesome, profound, well-written, amazing, amazing, and amazing. But Raven seems a bit ... evil-er in this story. And now Nightwing and Raven have a fuck-buddies relationship? What are you doing, TLSW? What are you doing?
| SexyPepperoni chapter 1 . 2/22
1st chapter down, more to go! AMAZING THIS IS. YOUR STORIES KEEP GETTING BETTER AND BETTER AS TIME GOES BY.
| The-Fantasy-Controller chapter 6 . 2/22
OMG! STARFIRE THINKS RAVEN KILLED NIGHTWING! RED X KILLED NIGHTWING! OR WAS IT JASON? IDK. REALLY GOOD CHAPTER. I DON'T KNOW WHY I'M MISSING THE ALERTS FOR NEW CHAPTERS. GRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAGGGHHHHH. I HAVE SO MUCH ANGER IN ME. I FEEL YOU, RAVEN, I FEEL YOU. I HATE RED X TOO.
| The Raggle Fraggle chapter 6 . 1/31
Red X is a sick bastard But you didn't it to the full potential! Red X had one thing that would have sent Dick to the after life with Comfusion and a sence of Betrayal and longing. He had Jason Todd. His face. His brother turned enemy only revealing his face to his brother on a Death bed that he laid him on. Would have been awesome.
But this story is still the shit. So no complaints.
| The-Fantasy-Controller chapter 5 . 1/20
Whoa… I have no words for this amazingly written. This is my favorite CHAPTER EVER! THIS IS TOO AWESOME! WHY CAN'T eVERY STORY BE LIKE THIS?! WRITE MORE PLEASE! MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!
| KenziiTheVulpix chapter 5 . 1/19
I think this is my favorite chapter so far!
Things are getting very good! I wonder what would happen if Ravens demon half was with Red X's "demon half." Curious, curious. Nothing good I'm sure! That much evil in one place? Haha. Anyways... I wonder if Raven will ever have to use that gun... will she even be able to fight him after that? I wonder...
Oh! And... once I finish up my current fanfic I will be writing a TT fanfic. You have inspired me to write one! Thank you!
| The-Fantasy-Controller chapter 4 . 1/18
Wow. Ahem, sexy scene here, dude. I liked it.
So Red x trashed Nightwing's room, heh? Cool. I wonder what Nightwing's reaction will be like. Mad? Angry? Wonder? Well do t leave us wondering too long! Update soon ya little genius!
| psychic soul chapter 4 . 1/17
Wow! You're just entering high school! But you write so well! :o Your story is really interesting, so keep up the good work and good luck with your applications!