|Reviews for Friends with Benefits|
| DtownGurl4488 chapter 17 . 11/16
Still definitely think that a little bit of drama would be a welcomed asset to the already really hot sex that they're all having with each other. And who knows maybe I'll just kind of merged into this polyamorous relationship. And yeah realistically some drama could turns into into seeds of mistrust or whatever but it's a fan fiction so anything goes. And yeah the guy guy girl thing that everybody is waiting for will probably be interesting but I'm looking more forward to more Brooke and Peyton honestly.
| NALEY23alwaysforever chapter 17 . 11/16
I do not have accurate words to describe how hot this was!
Wow seems to sum it up pretty well haha
I’m excited to see Peyton really looking into what all this arrangement could mean for them and exploring her own sexuality and preferences a bit - hopefully we get more Breyton please!
| Guest chapter 17 . 11/14
That was sexy af! What makes the whole story even hot is that at some point Brooke and Lucas dated and had sex and so did Julian and Peyton so the chemistry is already sold. Even though I'm a Brucas fan and loved this chapter I don't know why but my fave chapter is still the Julian Peyton one with Brooke watching. I look forward to having a new fave.
| Guest chapter 17 . 11/13
This was so awesome! From Brooke's POV and a long one too! I liked it a lot. I cant wait to see how the next chapters go. I cant wait for the LPJ threesome.
| CCLP4lyphe chapter 17 . 11/13
Okay now- y’all know I am not now nor I will ever be a Brucas fan but I gotta admit that was good even thou it was a lil torturous for me to read lol. I absolutely love how Lucas Put it down on Brooke, I mean gotta hand it to him the man got some stamina. Peyton, you are one lucky ass girl to have Lucas Scott as her husband. Lol I think Brooke will never forget that night with her best friend’s hubby ekkkk. Oh my gawd, Leyton y’all are bad. I can’t believe that Peyton was actually in the same hotel let alone just a few doors down from Brucas doing the nasty hahahaha -I thought that was kinda brillz, man I love LP. Lucas and Peyton well played grasshoppers lol. I loved the look on Brooke’s face when Lucas told her about Peyton lol. Nice update... I’m kinda dying the see some Leyton smutty goodness and I also can’t wait to see P. Sawyer getting dicked down by both Lucas and Julian— that should be oh so good to read. Looking forward to reading smut goodness chica. Please update ASAP.
| LeytonFanatic chapter 17 . 11/13
Wow! That was intense. And Hot!
And that plot twist at the end with Peyton AHAhhahh
I’m really looking forward to that Lucas/Peyton/Julian sandwich lol
| dianehermans chapter 17 . 11/13
best chapter so far for me
| Guest chapter 17 . 11/13
Wow! AMAZING. Love a good brucas smut, thank u. Can you please write lucas brooke julian?
| k-pixy chapter 17 . 11/12
This was hot! And it was just a suggestion and I understand. Keep the fun going
| k-pixy chapter 16 . 11/6
When's the next update? I would love to find out what happens next. And I think DtownGurl4488 is right a little tension between the couples would be great especially if it leads to angry sex.
| DtownGurl4488 chapter 16 . 10/27
Didn't think I'd be as into this story as I am, especially since I've never been a Leyton fan but hey hot sex is hot sex. Good job.
I realize I may be the only one but I think a little drama wouldn't hurt. Just think of all the steamy angry sex that could come of it.
Also, there should DEFINITELY be more girl on girl. Brooke should strap up and f*** the sh** out of Peyton in the CoB store or recording studio. I'm talking about squirting and temporary paralysis.
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/3
Very sexy chapter, please update soon!
| BreytonLover98 chapter 16 . 9/25
8000 words from the smutty mouth of B Davis? I do not think I could handle that intensity but goddamn I really want to read it!
So anxious for what’s next
Update soon x
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/20
are you going to write brucas smut? cause if you are you have my attention ;)
| Guest chapter 16 . 9/18
Thank goodness you updated! I thought you left us high and dry ;) Great teaser chapter!