|Reviews for She's not human!|
| AZsgirl chapter 31 . 1/15/2014
All caught and looking for more!
| AZsgirl chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
Wow how did I miss this one? Sounds different, lots to catch up on!
| Guest chapter 31 . 1/13/2014
SMH not another Paula Dean
| Raw chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
Your storyline seemed very interesting and I was excited to jump in and read. However, upon reading your disclaimer I have chosen not to engage the story. The fact that you chose to put a disclaimer to explain (away?) that you are in fact not racist, even though the mutants of your story are people of color says a lot. It means that you yourself saw something jarring with the dichotomy you created in your story. The thing about racism is that it is not just blatant, conscious hate. It is also microaggressions. It is also a deep rooted social system planted decades ago that continues to grow and thrive toward the betterment of/maintenace of white supremacy at the expense of others. It is also privilege. It is also arrogance. It is also ignorance. It is also denial...all manifestations of a system that we embody and engage with at every moment. Your selection of white folks as human isn't random. At. All. Although I'm sure to you it is. It is another one of those manifestations where American is synonymous with white is synonymous with human. Which means that anything else is other. Which is exactly what has unfolded in your story. I'm sure reading this feels like a bucket of water being thrown in your face, but it is a reality that lives within your subconscious. A reality that has infected all of us, whether we want it to or not that allows us to feel comfortable viewing people of color as non/sub-human. This subconscious/conscious belief system then bleeds into real life having a very real impact on how we view treat and relate to others. I encourage you to think long and hard about why you went this way with your story and the impact it can have on the subconscious of those who read it.
Raw & Exposed
| selfmartin1 chapter 30 . 1/3/2014
Excellent story! Thanks for writing!
| hester0083 chapter 30 . 1/2/2014
So happy that Callie is back to life but sad that this is ending :(
Can we at least have a few more chapters to see how their relationship progress from here?
| katiejean01 chapter 28 . 1/2/2014
I mean this in the nicest way. If Callie dies there will be another battle.
| Kariopek chapter 26 . 1/2/2014
I love the story
I would love long chapters would be great
thanks for the explication!
please continue !
| faith003 chapter 26 . 1/2/2014
| Kariopek chapter 24 . 1/2/2014
I do not understand that it is a mutant?
I like good longest chapters
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/2/2014
does it make you sad that you dont even have a review a chapter?
| hester0083 chapter 19 . 1/1/2014
| Guest chapter 18 . 12/31/2013
Loving it Happy New Year! have a good time at the party.
| selfmartin1 chapter 13 . 12/30/2013
Thank you for continuing with this-it is awesome!
| hester0083 chapter 12 . 12/30/2013
Wow... Callie is going to sing and hope Arizona walks in soon? Please don't let Callie just pick up any woman and sleep with her... I want her to be with Arizona... please...