Reviews for Loose Ends
CrlkSeasons chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
I very much enjoyed your trail of breadcrumbs, including the final line tying the stories together. Some nice bits of fun with Bond's extrapolation of 'basic facts' from extraordinary events, negotiating the ever-present world of bureaucracy and the power of a potential insurance claim in that world.
m klindt chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
Great start! Michelle
AlienTourist chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
This was great! I loved it, it was hilarious. A lot of your wording was really creatively done, like "he felt a trip to New York coming on." Like a cold or something! Was that your intention? Either way, it was great. And for some reason the idea of Bond in an office doing paperwork was just really funny to me. I can just see him avoiding it, like something contagious.
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