Reviews for A Tale of Two Hobbits
FaithfulReader92 chapter 15 . 1/27
Finally! A rare, good Bilbo/OC. Please, please, please continue!
bleachcreep21 chapter 15 . 8/3/2014
I do hope you continue this story someday. It is absolutely adorable and the relationship between the two Hobbits is something in which most people can empathize. Especially growing up with a Best Friend.
biddle29 chapter 15 . 5/18/2014
This is heart breaking :'( POOR BILBO! I'M CRYING!
blueskydog chapter 15 . 5/18/2014
Oh dear, poor Bilbo :(
veronicaispie chapter 14 . 5/16/2014
Amazing! Please update soon, I read all of the chapters in like an hour! I really want to keep reading. :)
angiehero chapter 14 . 5/15/2014
I had begun reading this story the night before up until the very last moment my eyelids were too heavy to bear; I believed I stopped at chapter 5. About three hours later, this colossal thunderstorm starts rolling in and I absolutely could not go back to sleep so I decided to continue reading on my handy dandy kindle. ... I just finished chapter 14 about 15 minutes ago...

... This story. THIS story... is utterly magnificent. I am outraged as of right now (in a very good way) and would KILL to have the next chapter before my eyes. PUH-LEASE continue writing! You are doing a marvelous job! _
biddle29 chapter 14 . 5/12/2014
I can't help but feel bad for Kili, I love him! But I really do want to see Elana and Bilbo together. I can't make up my mind about this! It's a reall good chapter though!
bleachcreep21 chapter 14 . 5/11/2014
I'm so exited to see this story come back to life! Poor darling Bilbo, though!
blueskydog chapter 14 . 5/7/2014
Wow, this was a really emotional chapter. I was SO SCARED when I read Elana's nightmare! I'm so glad she woke up! And Kili's confession-well-I do feel bad for Kili. And I felt scared for Elana too. I wouldn't want to be in either of their situations!
I wonder what Bilbo is feeling? Maybe he's just disorientated? Or is something else wrong? Finally Elana is starting to like him again and he acts like this...? What's going on?
I don't think he would feel bad for saving her! No no Elana, don't think that! It's something else! BUt you have to find out!
xxxMadameMysteryxxx chapter 14 . 5/7/2014
Gr8 chapter plz update soon : )
ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
Update immediately, please!
Reader chapter 13 . 5/4/2014
Wow that is true courage :( poor Bilbo, he's so brave!
blueskydog chapter 13 . 5/4/2014
Nooo! Not Bilbo! Arg, this is agonizing!
Before that, I like how Bilbo and Elana's relationship is slowly starting to evolve. I also like how she talked back to Kili that once, but still keeps her eye on him throughout the action. I also like your description of Bilbo's sword and how interested the hobbits are in it, something that didn't get enough attention in the movie (in my opinion).
SweetAsBloodRedJam chapter 13 . 5/2/2014
Just keeps getting better and better :)
Vulcanlover12 chapter 13 . 5/2/2014
GAH! %$ SAGHEGEGERONHTEAOENAOSFLGSHJEEOHNASDFDSAFGHDGJJHGKSTJTZG! (update soon)
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