This is such a great opening chapter to a story. Just a straight deep dive into all the tension, angst, anxiety, and feels that really last through the whole thing. No lead up, no cozy opening scene before crap hits the fan, just jump in with both feet. I love it. It hits you out of nowhere, just like it does Felicity. I enjoy the whole story, but especially kudos on this first chapter.

I know you wrote this story years ago and you might not even be on this website anymore but I just wanted to let you know this story has been the best story i've read off of this website. It's well written and I just couldn't get enough of it. Thank you for writing it :)

Extremely well written, great pacing, tight and constant tension with welcome breaks. It's beautiful work.

Alright, I know I'm around...7 years late, but wow. This was an amazing story. I mean I don't think I've enjoyed a story like this in a long time. Thank you!

Holy crap! The story was so amazing. I loved the little cute moments throughout the story. The story is wrapped up so well and Oliver's pov was a pretty nice touch. Can I just say how I loved the fact that instead of showing an epilogue with a wedding or kids or something else you showed it in Debbie's pov? Awesome story!

I thoroughly enjoyed your story from beginning to end! I loved how you placed Oliver’s POV after Felicity’s rescue, it seemed to make more sense there to me. I found in August, 2020 and the stories I have read so far are great and timeless. I loved how you wrote each character, and I especially liked Thea. I could see their personalities jump out in each chapter. Great job and yes, your story was complete from beginning to end, you wrapped it up very nicely. This was indeed a Felicity story.

I love this storie. I Starter it, then i lost in my list and was searching to find it again. Then i don't stop reading. I like the hurt comfort moments and how you written the characters. I really can feel the tension between them. Love the smal part in chapter 16(?) where Felicitiy felt asleep with her tablet and Oliver bring her to bed. That was cute and nice written - of course Like anything around. Thank you for this greate reading time.

Very well written. Kept me intrigued until the end. Keep the stories coming.

Woah, that was just
WOAH

Holy crap where the hell does he get all these bombs

I KNEW IT

Holy crap i just got chills this is amazingf

Where do I even start? So good! This was a very well written and thoughtful story. I couldn’t put it down. The tension between the two was so powerful and the pacing was on point. The epi was smart and just enough to tie everything up in pretty pink bow. I loved it!

I love how this story explored Felicity's character. That she is her own person and a hero to her own story.

For some reason, Debbie felt important in Felicity's story. I can't explain it. Felicity has always been a person who would go above and beyond for others. So I expected more than an acknowledgement of gratitude for the diner waitress who lent her a phone. I'm really glad how Debbie was written again in the story. I was pleasantly surprised by the epilogue, and enjoyed the positive closure to a heavy material. Thank you, dear author. :)

I just wanted to say this is the story I come back to when I want to read something with REALLY great writing and angst and some action and a lot of heart and emotion. It doesn’t matter how many times I’ve read it I’m always on the edge of my seat and I always shirk all other responsibilities in order to keep reading and have to pull myself away in order to keep auditing. But I’m always back as soon as I have a spare minute! It’s soo good. Thank you for this and for all your other pieces. They truly give me an escape!