Pretty good chapter, you wrote Clem and Bonnie well. Just one suggestion on Bonnie though, at least for me, I got the impression she was somewhat living in denial about the camp and her role from the game. Your Bonnie seems a little more direct with herself. That's cool too, it's just the impression I got.

Also you mixed up a few words though: clicks is spelled cliques, empathized instead of emphasized, and silence instead of science. :)

I liked how andrew is trying to redeem himself.

All of this build up towards Kenny and Andy's upcoming "chat" is really making me anxious, this story has me on the edge of my seat! Great job, really

I can't wait until Kenny and Andy have a nice private... "chat".

Good work, Mike. I'm eagerly awaiting the confrontation between those two.

The point of view was interesting.

Entertaining chapter, and the length felt just right. Keep it up! :)

poor Kenny...

Wow, hope you feel better soon and your family stuff works out. Sorry to hear that.

Now, if I can make an observation about your story? I still like it and enjoy reading it, but the addition of Andy to your tale seems to have not had as much and impact as of late, not compared to at first. To me, hearing how Andy and the group are dealing with Andy's injury and recovery are more interesting than rereading stuff that I already played in the game. It's great that you've taken artistic license with the dialogue, but I feel it could use a bit more. Why hasn't Kenny recognized Andy yet? Why has no one mentioned anything about the guy missing a finger? No reference to Andy or his cooking or anything when Clem and Walter had their tasting scene? Do you see what I mean?

Like I said, you write well, but I find myself forgetting Andy even exists in the group at all, except for when he pops in a line or two of dialogue. How has Andy's presence affected the group's character and dynamic? You have a story with a lot of potential here, I'm just waiting to see more of it realized. Please don't take offense to any of my comments, I only give them with good wishes.

Don't worry about it. The Steam Summer Sale is a perfectly fine reason to not update anything. Summer Sale everything else. if you wanna add me on steam for whatever reason, i'm dnc510. also, #PinkTeam4Lyfe

This chapter was a bundle of feels ;.;

It's cool, I can wait. Just take your time.

Holy Crap... Andy St John. This story just gets better and better.

I liked Rebecca's jab at Clem about the baby. Something the game was lacking.

Can't wait to see how Kenny reacts to seeing Andy

PLEASE finish the story I love it so so soooooooo much