Reviews for Reckless
amr56 chapter 21 . 5/14
This story is really great. It's so complex and you have so many things going on, I am very interested to see what happens next. I hope you update it soon. Thanks for sharing!
New chapter 21 . 5/12
Have you forgotten your suffering readers?
LionLock chapter 21 . 5/6
Such an intriguing plot, I love how gradual the relations between HG and SS is. In response to your last note, please continue this story it has to be one of the best MLC fics I have read in sometime.
delta1 chapter 21 . 4/27
Please keep going
IAbsolutelyLove chapter 1 . 4/10
Hi! So I'm basically one of your new reads! I'm really not sure where exactly to start from but I have so much to say considering I've just finished reading 21 chapter. One thing you should truly know if that, I normally don't tend to review or say anything but I couldn't stop myself from leaving a review!

When I started reading the story, in the beginning I felt like I didn't like one bit of this story. I'm morally a crazy Snape/Hermione fanfic reader, but the way he was treating her in this story just didn't bode well with me. But for some unknown reason I kept reading, maybe because of Thomas & his mystery! I thought this is one those book. That wouldn't have many snape and Hermione scenes, but to slowly watch them grow, even with their complexities! I love your snape, I love how you've portrayed him so accurately. I just really WISH that you would include more snape and Hermione scenes. I literally wait on every chapter to just see their growth. I also live how you've taken the story, slowly and gradually building it up! And what a plot, tbh! You're a really good writer, and you should definitely not discontinue this.

Your flare for mystery is just impeccable, I don't know where this story is going but I can't wait to see how it goes.

Just that I really wish there was more of snape and Hermione probably because I just love seeing them together, and I can't wait to see how your snape and Hermione are going to be!

But all in all, this a wonderful story and you should really not discontinue it! Hoping to hear from you soon!

Sending love, all the way from India :D
Clarine chapter 14 . 4/9
Hermione, "la plus brillante sorcière de sa génération". Elle semble singulièrement manquer de lucidité, là ! Malfoy lui fourgue entre les mains des indices et elle ne s'en rend même pas compte...

Réaction à la fausse couche : peut-être un peu excessive, non ? Dans la mesure où elle n'était pas au courant, elle n'avait pas eu le temps de s'attacher et compte tenu de la situation, ce devrait être un soulagement (même si elle aime Séverus, elle croit qu'il la déteste et sait qu'il ne veut pas d'enfant - même si c'est sans doute faux mais elle ne le sait pas-) : je la vois mal à ce stade se réjouir de mettre au monde un enfant 1) qu'elle ne sentirait pas désiré par ses 2 parents, 2) qui aurait à vivre dans ce contexte de couple parental qui n'est qu'une farce (à ses yeux tout au moins).
Clarine chapter 6 . 4/9
Votre fiction est assez fascinante et vous avez su dépeindre à merveille une atmosphère très angsty.
Ce Thomas est étrange (Thomas, Tom... comment ne pas penser à Voldemort ? Avatar ? Rejeton ? Une partie de son âme n'aurait pas été détruite lui permettant de se réincarner ? Ou leurre pour aveugler le lecteur ?). La relation entre Hermione et Severus est étrange, elle aussi, traduisant le malaise de ces 2 personnages face à la situation. Encore qu'on aurait pu penser qu'après les épreuves traversées, plus de maturité aurait émergée entre eux. Or ni l'un ni l'autre ne semble être en capacité de communiquer pour aider à une adaptation nécessaire entre eux. L'entourage semble également totalement méconnaître la situation (cf réaction de Lavande ou des élèves en général) et tout est fait comme si on cherchait à rendre les choses encore plus difficiles pour nos héros embarqués malgré eux dans cette union... Les autres professeurs semblent être absents, n'apportant aucun soutien moral affiché.
Quant à Hermione, je n'arrive pas à décider si je la trouve totalement OCC ou complètement dans son caractère...
Vous avez réussi à m'intriguer, voire me perturber. C'est la première fois qu'une fiction me fait cet effet. Bravo. Et merci.

PS : j'ai lu sur votre page votre annonce sur votre blocage, j'espère que vous l'avez dépassé ou que vous le dépasserez car ce serait dommage de laisser inachevée une telle histoire. Quoi qu'il en soit, bon courage et bonne continuation ! (ici ou ailleurs)
Karen Bristow chapter 21 . 4/9
Why his sudden concern for Hermione ?
New chapter 21 . 4/7
One more comment about the Severus/Hermione pairing of your story: I like the difference to the Severus/Lily relationship. With Lily everything was about doing the right thing in order to be accepted as a friend, about guilt/obedience, atonement/ punishment. The same was true with Severus' two masters, Dumbledore and Voldemort, and lately also the ministry. With Hermione everything is about his choices. Their marriage is over because Severus chose Fiona over Hermione, because he chose to not talk to her, to not respect and treat her as a wife...he chose to not befriend her, to push her away. Hermione dissolves the marriage because of the missing of some basic principles -the absence of love, loyalty, companionship, trust - and not because their relationship might be inconvenient or Severus not worthy of her... she is a very mature character and I still hope that times will get better for Hermione.
New chapter 21 . 4/7
I am relieved that Severus and Hermione are separated now. His reaction to her declarations - annoyance/ impatience/ changing of subjects - show me that he still has much to learn; a relationship with Hermione will never work when it is all about "leverage", "obedience", "control". I like the fact that he himself feels that his cheating on Hermione can not be called just a "mistake". There are no words for it. I wonder where this story is going... Somehow I wish that taking Hermione down to Voldemort's corpse results in her sharing Riddle's magical power with Thomas Stern and thus having a moderating effect on him - as kind of respected sister. And somehow I still hope there could be a short romance between Hermione and Draco, perhaps even a magical child and a career abroad for both of them...I am convinced that Severus' and Hermione's marriage can not be healed before Hermione will have a chance to experience what she wants out of life, in all aspects of life - education, career, love life, relationship, family... I hope you will not leave us hanging...
jensteed chapter 21 . 3/28
No please, please, please, please, pretty please don't discontinue! I came to read the update and needed to start over from the beginning, I just had to read it all again :) I hated Severus so much at the start, being so dismissive and awful to Hermione but he's slowly thawing. You can't end it just when he realises that he's actually come to care for his wife.
marianna79 chapter 21 . 3/23
Are you kidding? We're getting to the best part and you think we might want you to stop or discontinue the story? Please NO. I can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you for writing.
Slytherin Princess34 chapter 21 . 3/22
Please continue!
menage a trois chapter 21 . 3/22
Sooooo good
Guest chapter 21 . 3/20
Keep going please! Don't stop writing
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