|Reviews for Dragonia Road Ambush|
| Matt Perrett chapter 1 . 1/8
Wow, we really did do similar stories! I like your take on it, though, and I agree that the battle descriptions are excellent. One small typo I noticed is that "On retrospect" should read "In retrospect", but that's a very minor thing. What else can I say but that great minds think alike! (Except that would imply that I'm great, which I'm not P)
| Martin III chapter 1 . 1/6
This feels more like a fragment than a full story, but it's not too bad. There is a tinge of redundancy in that the last published Shining fan fiction also centers on the Egress mechanic, but this is an explanation rather than a parody, albeit one layered with your typically successful wit. The ending line is especially amusing. The translation of the game mechanics to story form is done pretty well too, and the fact that they're done in a fairly realistic manner makes the actual humor of the story funnier. The fight choreography is brief but extremely well done, a treat for anyone who found that battle memorable.