Reviews for Just One
FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Love it! :)
Zhian'tara chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
I agree - this would have been a great ending.

Great characterization. I hope you revisit these characters.
GitaMerah chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
lol! I love the conversation at the end. I wish the episode had ended like this.
willflourish chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
I really liked the Mestral character and I like your story. Any chance of any more of these?
Scroll chapter 1 . 10/11/2002
Excellent story with lovely characterisation for both Mestral and Maggie. Tone of voice, diction, and thoughts are all spot-on. Loved Maggie's opinion of the city: people are harder there. Would love to read more about his adventures on earth (hinthint). Good work!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2002
Great story; a sequel would be fabulous!
shadowback chapter 1 . 10/4/2002
very cute
Ascian chapter 1 . 10/4/2002
I love this! The perfect ending to the episode!
Rachelle Ryan chapter 1 . 10/4/2002
Very good. I did say very after all. Love to see more, a sequel maybe?
Xee chapter 1 . 10/4/2002
nice story.

Made me smile.
jessica chapter 1 . 10/4/2002
Great story... Very Cute
BoltcasterGirlie chapter 1 . 10/3/2002
Cool! This is really nicely written, and your characterization is right on. It's definitely something I could see happening after the episode. Nice job _
Adastra chapter 1 . 10/3/2002
That was delightful! The dialog and interaction were very believable. I hope you will consider writing more about Mestral in the future.