Reviews for That One Boy S
TheMysticalQ chapter 2 . 7/21/2014
I had a feeling they didn't just talk. Kinda surprised at the sudden jump from past to future this chapter made, though.
TheMysticalQ chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
I knew it was gonna have to be some kind of fantasy. Still, it's kind of surprising it took such a short time for Ness to finish. Most people need at least 12 just to get properly excited.
ness x lucas fan chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Ohhh sure blame ninten lol xD more story plz(( ゚゚))
The Great Chicken Miasma chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
Oooooh, great job! This was so steamy (Pun intended)! The pacing was excellent; I was pulled in, but suspicious at the same time at how Lucas could've gotten in when Ness claimed the door was locked. And let's be honest, I think everyone's done something like this before, whether it was with a significant other or an OTP. I can definitely relate 3
Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
Good job! Im looking foward to more
Blue Metal Hero chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
Wait... so Ness was dreaming about that?