Reviews for Beautiful Harmony |
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drifting melody chapter 80 . 8/23 Oh my god this is incredible |
Child of Dreams chapter 80 . 5/8 Did you just kill Temujin? |
Little-Red711 chapter 6 . 1/12 I like it so far but some of the parts I just question why it's like that. Like for example inner sakura i get that she is what remains or og sakura but having her be able to influence sakura's chakra makes literally no sense whatsoever. Like she is a mental construct that is basically a split personality due to having to suppress emotions that are not lady like in canon but in this your using inner sakura as a bit of a sounding board in a way but at the same time using her as someone sakura can confide in. Personally I feel like inner sakura is doing a bit too much like she's basically in control of the body cause she was like act this way or that. It seemed like the mc is relying too much on inner sakura for things like thinking and the such like having an AI tell you everything and you just copy and paste what they said kind of like a puppet. So basically I feel like the mc is a puppet in an odd way |
AJKitKat chapter 80 . 8/8/2023 I know it has been a very long time but hope you are doing well. I do love reading this fanfic and always wish for updates, but I understand life can be . . . A lot. Anyway, I hope you continue with this someday because I would definitely love to continue reading it. Even if you ended up rusty and just haven’t written in a while, it wouldn’t matter to me, I just like this story too much not to love more of it. Thank you for creating this, I really enjoyed every chapter. So, You Keep Writing and I’ll Keep Reading. Always :) |
Lxzuli.Llyfish chapter 80 . 4/22/2023 Han pasado 5 años desde la ultima actualización, talvez sea una idiota sin embargo aun tengo la esperanza de que volverás |
Abyssalwhale chapter 1 . 3/22/2023 Lies about getting visions, then as soon as she gets a real one she ignores it. Lmfao. |
Abyssalwhale chapter 9 . 3/21/2023 You know that two year olds don't even have working sweat glands. Those don't develop until your like a teenager. That's why small children are so prone to overheating. |
Anon chapter 34 . 4/20/2022 Only Shadow Clones keep there memories. If the normal clone could do that, every child in the academy would be brain dead. |
Anon chapter 31 . 4/20/2022 Sakura: is being taught by the 3rd. Sakura: I will tank my academy grades so I don’t stand out. wut? |
Nemie-Chan chapter 80 . 10/27/2021 Wow so you gonna leave it on a cliffhanger like that and then dip? I've been binge reading this dude... it's been so long since you've updated this! I hope one day you will continue... you're not dead are you?... |
b4tling chapter 33 . 10/19/2021 The story is good, painfully dragged out but I actually quite enjoyed it. What made me just stop reading around the Uchiha Massacre arc was probably the fact that I couldn't help but be bitter with how shes learning under Hiruzen. The fact that she relied on him the most also ticked me off. I just heavily dislike Hiruzen, with everything he has done and overlooked as his time as the hokage. Not to mention his relationship with Danzo. |
Be Anne Piczon chapter 50 . 10/8/2021 I funking cried wahhhhh |
Guest chapter 46 . 8/24/2021 I stopped reading this fanfiction after sakura lost her sight. It just got to unbelievable and frustrating with the plot. I mean shes been training since she was three and knows what will happen yet she always gets thrashed everytime theres a confrontation. Good writing crappy plot |
TheWhatIfLover chapter 80 . 7/27/2021 Love it! |
Anonymous chapter 8 . 7/16/2021 Great story hope you update soon. |