Reviews for Beautiful Harmony
ch4tt3rb0x chapter 1 . 2/13/2020
I'm not sure if you're aware of this, but there is a copy of this story on Wattpad. Just wanted to let you know, because I wasn't sure if it was you posting your work onto another site, or if somebody had plagiarized your work?
cherryblossomszahime chapter 80 . 1/26/2020
Oh my God. I did not expect this. Theres so much. Theres so much going on in my mind and so much I want to say. This is incredible. I know it has been a while, but I hope you continue to update. Pls dont leave it where it is at. Thank you for dedicating so much time to this. Hope all is well and I'm looking forward to a future update. I'm at loss for words. I dont know what to expect.
Guest chapter 80 . 1/15/2020
Ooooh no please, continue to write this story, it is so good, you can not stop here. You have a wonderful imagination, that why you can not stop this fanfic. Like in my language; ton histoire est trop sacoche pour être arrêté, lâche pas de continuer et même à la terminé.
Guest chapter 80 . 1/9/2020
I really love the story!
Tonks94 chapter 70 . 10/14/2019
Love this story. One of the best naruto fanfics I’ve read.
Moe chapter 57 . 10/5/2019
I really hace that Reiko. Running everything
Kathryn943 chapter 1 . 8/21/2019
Hi! I was scrolling on wattpad when I found that someone published this story under a different username and retitled it. I don't know if that's your other account, but here's the link to the story.
my. /asP24JLdlZ
Thousand drop chapter 28 . 8/16/2019
Absolutely love the story, tho the fact that Hinata is turning 3 when everyone else is already 4 would mean she’s at least a year younger, correct me if I’m wrong. This would also mean she wouldn’t be in the same class as everyone else, meaning not the same teams.
I’m just very confused whether it’s purposely that way or if there’s any other reason. Anyways the story is very good so far, Youre doing great!
Shipmaster2005 chapter 1 . 8/16/2019
Hey, I found this story through the same one on Wattpad. I believe someone has copied this story onto there. I don't know if you have given them permission or not, I just thought that I would let you know. I really love this story so I wanted to make sure that the real author gets credit.
The user used the account name STAY-CALM-IM-HERE and changed the title of the story to Alone together.
Guest chapter 80 . 7/1/2019
Wow. Well written. Hope to see some new chapters anytime soon. Love this fix by the way
Mei chapter 1 . 5/3/2019
I really like your writing! Especially how you don't shy away from writing about the Mc's own feelings and confusion. You didn't skip/gloss over that part since MC's reactions is important and we get to know how she'll actually handle all this.

But maybe MC should be more shocked and panicked than that? especially knowing she has unknown voices in her head? I'd be pretty shaken lol.

Also, it's best to just give a general description of the convos between Inner and outer (they're essentially the same person? They shouldn't be able to communicate like this?) instead a full on lengthy dialogue around since it seems like she's talking out loud just to talk with inner which is weird lol. Just some suggestions I think would help :)
lelzzoner chapter 1 . 4/28/2019
hello just wondering if you published this story in wattpad with a different title "Alone together" because if not someone else did. I searched if you started there but then stalked them to see it they seem to have stopped publishing at 2018.

But started at 2017. I seem nosy. Sorry. I just really love your story. I would hate it if someone else took credit. They are called STAY-CALM- IM-HERE
Heiwacat chapter 80 . 3/30/2019
When will you update again, will
You ever update? It’s been quite
some time... I enjoyed your story
greatly, the plot is very entertaining
Keep up the good work
Letostag chapter 80 . 3/13/2019
Can't wait for more
Alex chapter 80 . 3/3/2019
I love this, thank you! Can’t wait for the next chapter! Thank you!
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