|Reviews for The Bloody Ashikabi|
| Guest chapter 22 . 8/3
Dumbledore is a fucking nazi
| Nathair1 chapter 1 . 3/20
i'm REALLY enjoying this, so far
too bad you discontinued it
| jimmy.oz chapter 24 . 3/16
Feel like he needs some more Sekirei to be honest but i doubt that will happen. well i am a stop for now till the next chapter of the one story makes me want to read here again lol.
| jimmy.oz chapter 21 . 3/16
Too be honest i am disappointed about him being injured with all the memories he got from tom and the fighting with Karusuba would think he wouldn't get hurt like that. not like it matters since the story was stopped but i read one story that made me want to read it again.
| Jimbocous chapter 34 . 3/7
Always sad to see a story abandoned, but providing an outline of the ending is _very_ much appreciated!
| Jimbocous chapter 35 . 3/7
Thanks for a great (re)read!
| jimmy.oz chapter 11 . 3/2
Feel like he should have had three Sekirei appear for his Patronus but maybe he just hasn't spent enough time with her for that.
| ran chapter 29 . 2/2
I can see why u dropped the story. you started having harry be a reactive fool. aka a non active character. Everyone is just shitting on him and he is taking it. he should have taken them by storm.
The cup happens, he appears and destroys it. Say the whatev its called 3 letter agency considers it a dark artifact if it can bind magic without consent. But it doesn't destroy the contract so he has to stay.
Dumbledor tries his shit and gets bitch slapped by him. He agrees to give his memories to the jap government and 3 letter again of the charms and poitoins etc which are attacks aka going over the British minsiterys heads. Although he doesn't have to cos just the threat of doing so works. therefore dumbledor starts trying to be more subtle
can have the demonstration which should just him using the fear magic again lol.
Then focus on herminie, the sister and the potters relationship for a minute, maybe some fluer too with the scatterings of ripping into the British wizarding world.
drop the weird adoptive father shitting on harry randomly thing.
Dumbles should do something dumb, therefore harry takes over hogwarts by using his titles and kicks him out. that can be the conflict to focus on, not harry suddenly taking everyone's shit like a bitch.
| ran chapter 8 . 1/1
simp. I know it doesn't really mean what it used to mean but that is harry.
| Jmechan24 chapter 25 . 11/16/2022
Hadn't he disowned himself and take another name, it should be irrelevant the pick of the goblet
| Jmechan24 chapter 10 . 11/15/2022
Should have just obliviated her
| sniperbro1998 chapter 35 . 9/22/2022
I'm still sad this was cancelled and given how no new stories have been made i assume you are done with writing.
| SeraphimBlue chapter 20 . 9/1/2022
Ron is an asshole because Ron is an asshole. He's too stupid to do anything but be an asshole
| SeraphimBlue chapter 9 . 9/1/2022
first opinion... the Potter's are braindead morons. they don't even care that Harry was taken from them. they're just happy he's not there cause if he was then life would be hard for them. boo hoo
| Please read me chapter 7 . 8/30/2022
So Harry looks like Zangetsu from bleach.