Reviews for The Bloody Ashikabi
scifighter84 chapter 35 . 8/29/2022
good job and i really like it and thankyou
Dirt Rider 712 chapter 34 . 8/19/2022
Reading this story a second time. It really is great!
Thank you,
Dirt Rider
lil-Bear2020 chapter 34 . 7/12/2022
I liked the storyline. sorry that tour muss skiped out on you.
DarkBan chapter 34 . 6/27/2022
A shame you lost the inspiration or will to continue this story, but it was a funride while itl asted!
THanks for writting and sharing as much as you did!

Hope you're well, author :)
Tim chapter 35 . 4/28/2022
My sincere thanks for the closing summary. It is truly appreciated that you took the time to let your readers know how the story concludes. While I would have loved to read the full story as told by your hand I understand that things change, focuses shift and interests evolve.

May Fate and Fortune smile upon you as you walk whatever path you have chosen.
Its a great story. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Cevandri chapter 35 . 3/8/2022
It was an awesome story, thanks for giving and end summary at least 5 of 5 till last chapter
MonkeyDGabry chapter 19 . 2/15/2022
Do you write Harry's personality differently chapter by chapter based on your mood? Or is your intention to have him be a schizo and a sociopath? Though i have the feeling its more of the first and you forgot how you portrayed harry in past chapters and just give him random moods. Meh
MonkeyDGabry chapter 6 . 2/15/2022
Bro, Harry Minaka? Do you realize how stupid that sounds? You know Minaka is his first name right? It's Minaka calling himself Minaka Harry. That's retarded. Couldn't come up with a family name?
Nercius chapter 35 . 2/8/2022
I greatly enjoyed the story and your take on the HP and Sekirei universe. I am especially happy that you posted what you had planned so that we know what path the story could have taken so that the readers aren't left completely in the dark. Hope life has treated you well and know that people still enjoy your work.
Jaoheah chapter 7 . 1/27/2022
wouldn't he use a notice-me-not spell to make his shopping trip less embarrassing?
jhechavarria chapter 10 . 1/15/2022
i dont like emotionless characters for one good reason they all have in common. the are bland, boring to read about.
this mc is much the same no matter what he went through i can't make myself like him in any way.

the story is good but as i said with the driving force(MC) being so bland it makes this story feel very hollow.
Resurrection99 chapter 35 . 12/25/2021
Was a fun read. Sad about how it ends but still a good read.
ManticoreBlues chapter 34 . 11/23/2021
sad to see this discontinued but I understand. lack of motivation or other possible factors are generally crippling when you're a writer from what I've seen as well as my pathetic one time attempt at writing fanfics. I started having a harder time reading this around the beggining of the Hogwarts arc so I'm assuming that's also around the time your struggles probably started? I absolutely love the idea of this fanfic and your writing is really good, I'd love to see a partial or maybe full rewrite eventually if you ever find another spark for this storyfor now I'll just have to check out any other fanfics you might've written
ASD Fictions chapter 1 . 9/23/2021
"His Aunt had a bad habit of burning him whenever he made a mistake" she did that to probably to make it that he just wouldn't try anything anymore
Guest chapter 6 . 9/7/2021
Perhaps the fact that you need to explain your actions in the story to what appears to be majority reviewers means that the readers don’t pay close enough attention to the story,
Or…
the actions of your characters don’t quite match what you claiming them to be.

Just food for some thought, otherwise very interesting story despite the fact it that Harry Potter has been steadily getting more OP until this chapter where he suddenly is average.
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