|Reviews for Sempiternal|
| Kira9221 chapter 2 . 1/25
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/25
HEY, THIS IS MY FIRST REVIEW HEHHEH I KNOW, BUT OMG. you haven't updated in so long, which is respectable as we all have our own lives and issues, and you might not even see this. but I just wanted to say that I love how you portray the characters and how you write as both sasuke and sakura, not many people can get them and their thoughts quite right, well, as I view them in naruto, and this plot is pure gold. hands down my favorite naruto fanfic. love you and I hope you keep writing! whether it be on this story or any other! you're AMAZING!
| Gh0stGrl chapter 2 . 9/23/2017
I really hope you continue this bc it's really well done and also incredibly realistic. Thank you for not making Sakura fall over at Sasuke's feet - I've always felt that she deserved better than that fate and the way that you're making them into a couple that has to work for it makes so much more sense than Kishimoto's version! Looking forward to more if you're up to it :)
| apali199413 chapter 2 . 9/4/2017
Hey..! I really like your approach towards the fan-fic... Do finish it...loved it...please do :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/18/2017
It's been years since you last updated this sequel but, hey, I'll give it a go! I love this story, i really do. It's everything I've ever wanted to happen in Naruto's real story. The way Sakura and Sasuke ended together was so not to my liking \\\3 I always thought she should have reacted to him in a similar way as you wrote her in here...
Anyways, I found out after reading this two chapters that you kinda dropped this sequel. Not to be pushy or anything but I'd love to keep on reading. Again, I'm aware it's been a while but, please, at least think about it.
Couldn't log in to send this review cause i forgot my password~ However, I'll come by to check once in a while to see if my words reached you.
If you don't want to, though, it's okay! I appreciate you writting up to this point.
Best of wishes,
| ZulyZulyyy chapter 2 . 8/9/2017
Ive reviewed...but you updating the story is the question...
| twipri17 chapter 2 . 2/6/2017
i completely understand lack of inspiration and stuff, but the butterfly effect was such an incredible story, even tiny little periodic updates (like if you ever want to do a writing exercise you could maybe fit it into this story bc you know the characters) would be such a blessing for all of your readers. youre not obligated to do anything, and its hard to continue with stories after youve moved on to different things, but snippets now and then would be a gift. (i know its only been 3 years but still)
| Precarious Obsessions chapter 2 . 1/2/2017
I love your story! I read the first one in a day and can't wait to see how sasuke and sakura's relationship progresses! And to find out how Sakura copes with everything in her head
| KakashiHatabae chapter 2 . 1/1/2017
wELL THAT NIGHTMARE KINDA F***ED ME UP BUT AWESOME CHAPTER
| KakashiHatabae chapter 1 . 1/1/2017
| StErLiNg.DiAmOnDs chapter 2 . 12/27/2016
I haven't read a story with such good characterization in a very long time. You capture the essence of the characters so effortlessly and that makes it so exciting to read! I loveeee how your plot is going, its not extremely slow but it doesn't skip over things that need to happen. I can't wait to read the next part, please please update soon!
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/4/2016
Wow I love this story. This is seriously one of the best fanfics I ever read. Writing Sasuke is really difficult but you manage it so perfectly. He does not say much but he thinks and feels he just hides it. I also love the way you make him hide his face beneath his hair in order to conceal his emotion just like in the manga. And I love how you dont make the transition of Sasuke returning and the whole war/peace stuff like an easy one. Cause it should not be easy. Sasuke has a looot of issues that he needs to figure out and being in Konoha must be hard for him and you portrayed that perfectly. Same goes for Sakura the road to acceptance and healing after the war and Sasuke cannot be easy. I also love the way you portrayed Kakashi and dont ignore the fact that he has a lot of issues with emotions and helping people in these kind of situations. And the Ino storyline is just heartbreaking especially the part of the birth of Asumas child. You are a talented writer and I really like your work. It realls is a shame you are not as invested in writing fanfics as you were in the past. But for what it is worth I would have loved to read more about thr whole journey Team Seven and Konoho have to go through after a war. Well thank you for writing this fic even if you dont continue it. :)
| acebabymilky chapter 2 . 8/19/2016
I'm so pumped when i found out you make a sequel, because in The Butterfly Effect, there's barely SasuSaku moment. Probably because you tried to keep Sakura's cold image or Sasuke's perpetually aloof i don't know. Are you gonna continue this story?
| Lesbrasdemer chapter 2 . 8/9/2016
Fdfagdtags are you going to contnue this?!
Because I'm really into this story. What interest me the most is the psychologique part that Sakura is suffering; something new among so many Sasusaku fics.
| crusincloud chapter 2 . 6/18/2016
Damnnnnnn please continue and update this story!