Reviews for Everyone Will Suffer
huh chapter 1 . 6/27/2014
bad story
AVP5 chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
Good work and this was well done.
Drake Zeppeli chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
I read this earlier, but couldn't review, mainly because I'm reading from mobile.

If anything, the dialogue is perfect in my opinion despite that there could be disagreements. If anything, sometimes sentences should be connected rather than two if they are in the span of five or less words if relevant to each other. For example, I think "But I lived on. And I was stronger." could have been "But I lived on, and I was stronger." But that's just me. :P

So yeah, I liked it overall. The characters do feel a bit strong there as you bring out their strong points and weaknesses.

Good luck in the future this 2014.

Drake Yagami
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