|Reviews for Humility|
| TheHamsterInMyMind chapter 1 . 2/20
*sighs* This relationship will be the end of me. I am SO glad that they managed to resolve this particular storyline this season though. (_)"
| Raydor Fan chapter 1 . 2/10
3 I love this fic so much. I want to review it 100 times LOL
| Kayryn chapter 1 . 1/4
Again, everything about the tone of the fic is perfect; the way Sharon and Rusty talk to each other is incredibly alike how they talk to each other on the show, I can actually hear and see it all in my head. I can see the way Sharon tilts her head and Rusty's eyes shift from place to place before landing on Sharon... And I love the way she calms him, assures him, she's really a mother to him, even if that's not the word he chooses to use.
| CreoleGurl chapter 1 . 1/1
Good job as always. Thanks for sharing.
| SChimes chapter 1 . 1/1
Aw, the bit where Rusty was like, 'let's get the yelling out of the way now' and Sharon smiled and tried to hide it, made ME smile. (and mind you, I'm still annoyed with him!). But okay, he has his redeeming qualities, and I always love that your episode tags showcase them and remind me why he should not be grounded for life :P.
Really great scene between Sharon/Rusty! I love that he expects her to be angry and she's just SO NICE about the whole thing and then won't even yell at him. (although I bet she wants to.) Plus him finally acknowledging that he has NOT BEEN LISTENING (and i'm with Sharon there, 'ya think'?), that was very cathartic to read and thank you!
And the ending, with the whole car thing, was both really sweet AND Sharon was SO GREAT because she mentioned the 'when we catch this guy' times, and that's totally what Rusty needs to hear right now, that there's a light at the end of the tunnel and how and why all this is worth it, and Sharon gave him that in a really subtle manner and it was perfect. Also, the last sentence was a perfect way to wrap it up.
| murphycat chapter 1 . 1/1
Very good chapter. When I saw the word "mother" both on the show note and here, I wondered if he thought first his biological mother, then Sharon, or which?
| Force Unbroken chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
Thank God, Rusty's finally seeing sense. Can I get a hallelujah amen?
I oh so love your episode tags. Just throwing that out there. Because the show has a habit of ending the episodes too early, and I always need a better resolution scene, and then you show up with all your lovely writing, and you make me very happy. So thank you. :)
And also, THANK YOU for having snarky!Sharon make an appearance here! First of all, I adore her, and second of all, she really needed an opportunity to decompress and get rid of all that ANGST that's been dogging her steps ever since Rusty decided to not listen and be an idiot. I love how she's basically telling him "I told you so" without actually, y'know, telling him "I told you so". So perfect. And Rusty... Well, I'd say I feel sorry for you kid, but it kind of serves you right. Maybe next time you'll take the cotton balls out of your ears and PAY ATTENTION TO SOMEONE WHO KNOWS WHAT THEY'RE TALKING ABOUT.
Fantastic as always! Can't wait to see what other stories you've got up your sleeve. *grins unabashedly*
| Mistmantle chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
That's cute! And I think you totally nailed Rusty's character (:
| Nevada11 chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
Great idea for a story! Enjoyed it.