|Reviews for Breathe|
| Guest chapter 67 . 2/8
I've missed your chapters so much. Please update soon!
| doraviolet1 chapter 58 . 10/30/2017
Now really looking forward for the new chapter as Finnick needs to go back to capitol for the "business Trip" and to dealing with his relationship with Annie. Love ur story very update soon xoxo
| doraviolet1 chapter 67 . 10/23/2017
hopefully there will be a new chapter soon. love u ya. have a nice day
| doraviolet1 chapter 67 . 10/23/2017
yes! finally! new chapter!yahooooo~~great job on this chapter! just feel little bit worry for Annie after Finnick have to go back to capital, to protect her, wonder what reaction will be if Annie found out the truth. please update new chapter soon. love a wonderful day
| Guest chapter 67 . 10/17/2017
thank you for updaing! Can't waait for the next chapter
| Fleur Delacour Hux chapter 67 . 10/14/2017
As always - my face lights up with joy when I receive an email that you have continued posting chapters to my favorite story on .
Also, I like how you have captured the essence of love and sacrifice that Finnick put out for Annie. :) it makes the original canon way more believable when Finnick confesses to Panem about how he was sold (viciously) by President Snow to different individuals. :) and it makes sense why he was able to stay sane during this hard line of prostitution.
As always please keep adding chapters to your story!
| Guest chapter 66 . 8/27/2017
| Janice.Lunaxo chapter 23 . 7/2/2017
This is honestly the best Finnick/Annie story I've ever read.
| doraviolet1 chapter 64 . 2/18/2017
thanks for this interesting story~~love it so much! no pushing no rushing,take ur time, just wonder if there will be a new chapter by this month? Looking forward for ur great work! have a nice weekend ya ) Xx
| doraviolet1 chapter 66 . 2/5/2017
oh! now I hate my lack of english vocabulary to ekspress my feelings for this chapter! first of all, thanks for this new chapter. I love it very very much! well done. while reading this chapter, all kinds of my emotions blends in, happy, joyful, sweetness ,a little bit sad sadness and frustrating is mix up too. so happy to see they determine to keep the relationship grow strong, lovely to see Annie's shyness side,this is so cute! I keep giggling throughout this chapter. love it very much! and I always feel touching by Finnick protective side, he is just a kind and sweet person. He always make sure Annie feel safe and Annie make his life worthful. But on the other side,kinda feel sad and sorry for Finnick, need to keep the secret and had to do what he gotta to protect the person he loves. He sacrifice so much. Worry about Finnick's fate and others obstacles that try to keep him away from Annie. I wonder what reaction of Annie will be if she find out the agreement with Snow. I still think that Snow will not let them go easily. oh, btw, love pansy lineif you think you can keep it hands off of Annie for a while" ,I can imagine the situation of that Finnick couldn't keep his hand off of A . thank u once again for putting up this new chapter. please update more soon.
| Fleur Delacour Hux chapter 66 . 2/5/2017
Pansy has no idea of what is happening, hahah. I am pleased that Annie feels safe right now... I am curious to see how it all plays out with Finnick/Snow keeping their ends of the bargain. As we know from the Hunger Games story, Finnick keeps his end of the bargain... If not taken even more advantage of by Snow!
As always. Thanks for the update on my favorite fan fiction story! :)
| Fleur Delacour Hux chapter 65 . 1/22/2017
I really enjoyed reading how Finnick and President Snow came to an agreement. I think that you captured he essence of Snow's greed in being able to make more money off of Finnick and being proud of the fact that Finnick really can never get out of it.
As always, this is beautiful. :)
| doraviolet1 chapter 65 . 1/22/2017
wow!thank u for this quick update! I plan to ask u if we can see new update by next week then u aldy grant my wish~ u so much~ Now we knowing Annie status,but I still think Snow will not give up easily, there will be more consequences and obstacles to torture them,poor lover! they deserved some happy moments.
| Guest-A chapter 63 . 1/19/2017
Love following your story! It brightens my day!
| doraviolet1 chapter 63 . 1/17/2017
wow! thanks for the update! it's getting more intense now! poor FinnickAnnie. did Annie can successful run away from Snow's claws? makes my heart beat fast to find out her fate. you really such a talented writer! love how u take ur time to scribe up their love journey in details and makes the character so full of life and stay true to ur theme "breathe".each time I read just makes me feel "woo"! well done