Reviews for Behind His Enemy Lines
catspats31 chapter 5 . 2/21
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Herr Doktor chapter 6 . 4/22/2016
I see that Flaky has accepted Flippy as a lover but will she not get hurt by Fliqpy?
Anon chapter 7 . 10/9/2015
Wow this is really dark (alternative ending and the dub con plus the fact everyone hates Flippy and Flaky has an extreme anxiety disorder).
I like your pacing and style
It feels like the alternative ending is the real ending ahahaaa and the previous one was just a dream or something
Guest chapter 7 . 9/30/2014
Please continue story's like that you're really good at what you do.
BlueScarlet465 chapter 7 . 6/30/2014
um, like the first ending better
Guest chapter 7 . 3/23/2014
I luv it! Please make more chappies!
Guest chapter 7 . 1/20/2014
what im confused ...oh well I like it
MushuFireLorde chapter 6 . 1/18/2014
Awww I liked it
Angel-that-saves-17 chapter 7 . 1/10/2014
I like the 1st ending it so cute
Guest chapter 5 . 1/8/2014
so cuuuuuuuuuuuuute they r so cute together they are a really good pairing I cant wait for the next chapter please update again soooon I don't mean to sound pushy but this is on of my favorites
Angel-that-saves-17 chapter 5 . 1/7/2014
Aw man i just act like flaky cuz i get to sacry that easy
Guest chapter 4 . 1/4/2014
flaky is so cute I cant wait for flippy and flaky to talk to each other PLEASE UPDATE
Angel-that-saves-17 chapter 4 . 1/2/2014
Its gonna happen i just knew
Angel-that-saves-17 chapter 3 . 1/2/2014
Oh something gonna down soon i just feel
Angel-that-saves-17 chapter 2 . 1/1/2014
Ooh new story keep it up